增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once a woman came to Mahatma Gandhi, known for the father of the Indian Independence Movement. She asked Gandhi to persuade her son give up eating sugar, that she thought was bad for his body. Gandhi asked the woman to bring a boy back in a week. Exactly one week late the woman returned, and Gandhi said to the boy, “Please give up eating sugar.” The boy agreed willingly.
The woman thanked Gandhi and as she turned to go, she asking him, “Why didn’t you say those word a week ago?” “Because of a week ago, I myself have not given up eating sugar.” Gandhi replied in a calmly voice.
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注意：每句只有一处错误多改不计分。
Eric and Sophie were neighbors. One day they were play together. Eric has a collection of marbles(弹珠) while Sophie had some sweets with him. Eric told Sophie what he would give her all his marble in exchange for her sweets. Sophie agreed. Eric kept the biggest and most beautiful marble aside and gave rest to Sophie. Sophie gave all her sweets for him as she had been promised. That night, Sophie slept peaceful. But Eric couldn't sleep as he kept wonder if Sophie had hidden some sweets from him the way he had hidden his best marble.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was raining when I went home from school yesterday. I see an old man walking difficultly in the rain without a umbrella. I went up to him and offered to share my umbrella with him. He was very surprising and said “Thank you.” When I tried to hold the umbrella to him, I found that she was very tall. I was too short hold the umbrella highly enough. Just when I was wondering what to do, and he took the umbrella. Several minute after we got to the bus stop, his bus came and he got on it. He again thanked me for that I had done. I went home happily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Several years ago, two Sichuan schoolboys made an important discovery with chance. One morning as they are gathering firewood, it suddenly started to rain heavy. They had to run to the near cave for shelter. Once outside, they saw some human bones on the ground. The boys were a little frightening at first. Then they remembered their history lessons, but soon realized they had found something very important. As soon as it stopped to raining, they left the cave and rushed to local police station to report their discovery. Scientists soon came and found more ancient human bones and many other valuable historical object.
【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In today’s society, the large number of people hold the view that 20% of one’s success lies in his IQ, while 80% in his EQ.
As far as I am concern, I fully agree with this opinion. First, with a high EQ, one will get along well with his companions, which makes that possible for him to work in a harmonious atmosphere and improving the working efficiency. Furthermore, those who has a high EQ can discipline them and bravely overcome the difficult in their life. Apart from these, if one has a high EQ, he will be likely to lead to a colorful and interesting life.
In brief, it is one’s EQ plays an important part in one’s life. Therefore, EQ is equal important for one to be successful even if not more vital than IQ.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the winter vacation I went on a trip, which was very wonder because I tried something I had never experience before. We walked along the beach on one morning, enjoyed sunshine. During the time, someone strongly advised that we went water skiing. However, I didn’t dare to face a challenge because it seemed dangerous to do it. My friends all encouraged mine, so I final joined them. At last, I couldn’t stop screaming in fright. Later I felt that it was amazing. From the experience I learned that we should be brave enough try something new.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词效模画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
About eight years ago, I go to visit my grandfather during the summer holiday, who lived in a small village. One Saturday afternoon, my grandfather asked me climb a nearby mountain with him. At first, I ran fast, leaving my grandfather behind. However, about twenty minute later, I felt so tired that I stopped run and eventually chose to sit down for the rest. Soon, my grandfather reached when I was. He looked at me and asked, "Have I noticed the beautiful flowers along the way?" I kept silently. My grandfather smiled, "My dear, you are not in a race and on a journey." After that, my grandfather and I had walked slowly, appreciating the scenery and laughing along the way.
