假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My neighbour Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, said it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoking and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give up all these habit. Not long ago, he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time when that he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy her example.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This is a true story what happened last year. One day, my uncle invited a old professor to supper. During the evening, it rained hardly. Because of the professor walked to my uncle's, my uncle advised him stay overnight. The professor agreed and thanks my uncle politely, and while my uncle was washing the dishes, the professor disappeared. My uncle couldn't find her anywhere. However, the front door bell rang after 40 minute. It was the professor. His clothes was wet through. He said that he had gone home to get his toothbrush.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum made the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ms Smith，
I’m writing to ask whether you could do me favor. I’ve just finished an essay naming “Differences between traditional Chinese and Western festivals”，so I’m not sure whether it is well written. To be honestly，I’m not that familiar with some traditional Western festivals. That’s because I’m turning to you for help. I’d appreciate it if you could spare some time to look through your essay for possible mistakes and polish them. Also，I’m looking forward to your valuable advices. My essay has been sending to you along with this email. I hope it won’t cause you very much more trouble.
Thank you by advance.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个下漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用从左上向右下的斜线（\）划掉即可。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_____），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen, and for several months he was taught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. One day he and his friends were practice shooting, and all of them were doing quite well besides Peter.
After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit him once, the officer who was trying to teach the young soldiers shoot said, “You’re quite hopeless. Peter! Don’t waste your last bullet, too! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!” Peter felt shameful. He went behind the wall, and a few seconds later the officer and the other young soldier heard the sound of a shot. “Heavens!” the officer said, “Has that silly man really shot himself?” He ran behind the wall anxiously, but Peter is all right. “I'm sorry, sir.” he said, “and I missed again.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I had breakfast one morning with my two-year-old sister in a restaurant. I was taught her some table manners when a old lady came up to us. She said my sister was so lovely and will grow up to be a beautiful lady. I thanked him and she left in a hurry. I was told my sister that she should also say thanks because the lady spoke well of her. Just then the lady returned get something which was left on her table. My sister said thanks and that she was also beautiful. The nice word the lady said about my sister made us happily. Maybe it was the same to the lady.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tom was having much trouble get up in the morning and was always late with work. His boss wanted to fire him if he didn’t start coming on time, but he went to the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. The man does as told and slept really well, waking up before the alarm had even gone off. He had time for a properly breakfast and was the first reach the factory. “Boss,” he said, “that medicine really works!” “I’m pleasing to hear it,” said his boss, “but where are you yesterday?”
