增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’d like to share a unforgettable experience with you.It happened in a warm Sunday afternoon in August.I go shopping with my cousin，Li Ming.When walk in the street，we found a young man，who was big but strong，stealing a woman’s wallet.We stopped her immediately.Though he stared at us angry，we didn’t feel frightened and tried to make him to realize his bad behavior.Because our bravery，he left without saying a word.The woman thought highly of us for which we had done.In my opinion，it’s our duty to fight against bad behaviors.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.
He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect, so it was much better than the old one.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was Sunday and I decided to sleep late. But it wasn't long after I realized that I had to get a reference book our teacher had ask us students to buy. I quick got up and headed for a bookstore, which was three block away. As I reached the store, I noticed that I left home without bringing any money. Although I was a little annoying with myself, I could do nothing but return home about the money. Therefore, I run all the way home to fetch the money. After a while, I returned to the store and bought book I wanted it. Imagine what relaxed I was.
增加:在缺处加个漏字符号（^）.并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词回下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起）不计分。
3.错误类型不涉及单词拼写。
I rare saw my father before I was 8. For this reason, I feel somewhat lonely and almost never opened my mouth at school. So this made you unpopular throughout my schooldays. But I had the habit of making up stories and hold conversations with imaginary persons. This created a world of my own which I could enjoy myself to the full. Then I knew when I grew up, I would be a writer. However, the amount of serious writing producing through my childhood was less than half a dozen page. At an age of 17, I nearly abandoned the idea. Fortunately, I encouraged by my mother to face with unpleasant facts. From then on, I tried to settle down and write books.
