Last Saturday,I have a school trip with my classmates and teachers. We met at the school gate at eight in the morning and then we set off by the bus.
First,we visited the Great Wall. When we got there,it was nine. We started to climbing the great wonder of ancient China immediate. That was the first time that we had visited them,so we were very exciting. We took many photo on the Great Wall. Then we had lunch there,after which we left the Fragrant Hills. When we got there,we were amazed at the beautiful maple leaves,what made us not want to leave. We stayed at the top of the mountain for an hour and at five in the afternoon we returned.
How an unforgettable trip!
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Our school came up with an innovative program to promote a traditional value of honesty. We introduced an activity calling the “unsupervised examination” for some of the classes. That means during this examination, there is no teacher present to oversee the student. Before taking this examination, students need to sign up a letter of commitment. Students expressed that it’s good to feel trusted but they enjoyed the relaxed atmosphere in the examination. We also introduced what is called the “honest umbrella”. Printed on each umbrella was short statements about honesty and other values. At the end of the term, all the umbrellas were returned in one piece, none of them had been lost or damaged. The program works so well that we plan to introduce to another branch of our school. Build a culture of honesty needs the participation of everyone. We hope more teachers and students can get involved.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其正下方写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last term an English speech contest is held in our school. Seen the notice, many students took interest in it. My English teacher Miss Li thought it was a good chance for me to improving my English and encouraged me to take part. So I decided to have a try. During the prepare, my teacher offered me great help. She not only polished with my speech draft and also corrected my pronunciation. As a result, my speech improved great. Then the day for the competition came, and I did good job and got first prize! I owed it all to my teacher. Without his help, I wouldn’t have got so a good result.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
I have been delighting that finally a summer camp will be organize during the last week of the summer vacation. The camp includes various course such as cooking, swimming and giving first aid. I plan to sign up the course of giving first aid.
I choose to attend the course due to the fact that first aid is greatly important to people. If a person gets injured and need urgent medical care before a doctor arrives, every second counts, in that case giving first aid can even help save life. Nowadays, more and more people have realized what important first aid is.
Besides, I plan to study the medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopeful, the course will help them learn more medical knowledge to deal with emergencies.