增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On the eve of the National Day, I together with a lot of people sing loudly and danced excitedly in the Tiananmen Square, celebrated the happy moment. Among us there were a large number of foreigners as well too. In the past few year our great motherland has been developing very fast that it gains a great reputation in the world , which attracts more foreign people to travel and study in China. And gradual they fall in love with the country and are determining to settle here too. All of us are very amazed or happy at these great changes because it really make our life much better. As consequence , we decide to work harder than ever before for a beautiful future of our country.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was March 8th, Women’s Day. I decided to do something for my mom and give her a surprise.
Immediately after school, I went to the supermarket, when I bought plenty of vegetables, fish and meat. As soon as I arrived home, I started to prepare the dinner for Mom. It was the first time that I had cooked something on my own. Not knowing the exactly process to cook. I read some recipes first. Keep what I had learned in mind, I got down with cooking. Almost an hour later, three simple but delicious dishes were ready on the table.
Since Mom couldn’t get home until thirty minutes later, I started to do some cleaning. It was not difficult for me. Mopping thoroughly, the floor was quite clean.
No sooner had everything been ready Mom came back. I couldn’t wait to show what I had been done for her. A big smile with both surprise and satisfy spread on Mom’s face when she found the hearty(丰盛的) dinner and the tidy room. At that moment, pride rose from a bottom of my heart. Although she fell a little tired, everything was worthwhile.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线, 并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My eight birthday was the most unforgettable and special one. On that day, I received a life-changing gift from my grandmother. It was a pair of roller skates. I couldn't believe my eye, when I opened the box. The shoes which total changed my life was so beautiful. That I was scared of in the past was to talk with others. I used to have no friends. The moment when I learned how to skate, I became confidence and outgoing. I made plenty friends by doing this. I'm thankful to my grandmother. Now I'm a happy girl but believe in myself. Meet new people, I smile without any fear.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Ladies and gentleman, Thank you for coming today to attend the graduation ceremony at No. 3 Senior High School. Firstly of all, I’d like to congratulate all the students who are here today. I remember meet all of you when you were just started Grade 7 at this school. You were all so full of energy and thirst for knowledge. And yes, some of you were a little difficult to deal !But today I see a room full of talented young adults who is full of hope in the future. I hope you'll remember the important people in your lives who helped and support you — your parents, your teachers, your classmate and your friends. Please consider how they’ve done for you and what they mean for you. Lastly, the end of junior high school is the beginning of a new life. You’ll make mistake along the way, but the key is to learn from your mistakes and never give up. But along with difficulties, there will also be many excited things wait for you. Behind each door you open is chances to learning new things, and you have the ability to make your own choices. Choose wise and be responsible for your decisions and actions. Although you have to go your separate ways now, but I hope that in a few years’ time, you’ll come back to visit our school.
As you set out on our new journey, you shouldn’t forget where you came from. The future is your. Good luck and hope to see you again sometimes soon!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if the poor lived, so he could be thankful to his wealth. They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that would be considered a very poor family. On their return back, the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt. The boy, who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home, replying in a way that shocked his father.
The boy said he wanted to become farmer. He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns. His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home. Finally the boy finished by saying, “Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”
With this, the boy got up and walked away, leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa, totally speechless.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I would like to express my thanks with your kindness during my stay in London last week. Know that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, especial the Spring Festival, I would love to introduce it to you. The Spring Festival, one of the most important festival in China, falls on January 1st in the lunar calendar. It has a long history, where was originally celebrated to drive away a monster “Nian”. Different that in the past, it is now given new meanings. On the New Year’s Eve, each family have its members gather together. They tell each other their lives in the past year, exchange gifts and to eat delicious meals in the warm of the family. I hope you will come here and experienced this wonderful festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In my early days at my senior high school, I struggled to keep up in class and near dropped out. The problem was what I had no self-confidence. Then coming Miss Li, my English teacher. She told me to try much hard. Whenever I lost the heart, she would encourage me: You can make it. I spent hours memorize words. We meet in her office each morning and she would urge me read English for at least 20 minutes. Eventually, something amazingly happened and I got high marks in English. I am grateful that Miss Li often gives me confidences.
