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Dear Tom,
In your last letter, you tell me that you got fat and didn’t enjoy good health, that made me worried. Now I want to give you some way to keep fit. I think doing exercise and keeping a balanced diet is important for our health. Doing exercise is not necessary for us. It is helpful to keep fit and get their body and mood ready to a busy day. A balanced diet means a lot to good health because it is wise to eat nutritious food. And the sooner we develop a good eating habit, the good it is. I’d like you take what I said into consideration.