增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Mid-Autumn Festival, that is one important traditional festival in China, falls in August 15th of the lunar calendar every year. It was celebrated both in China and many other Asian country. People believe that a full of moon is the symbol of reunion and good luck. This is also a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this particularly time. On that day they usually go back home to have a family get-together, so they appreciate the beautiful moon, enjoyed the typical food—the mooncake. All Chinese have wonderful time at the festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls in the 15th of the 8th month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festival, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usual, no matter what far away or how busy we are, we will try to go to home for the celebration. The moon that night looked the brightest in the whole lunar month. That we love most is the time we appreciate the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruit, share our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have wide range of choices such as travel and visiting our relatives or friends.
Dear Mike,
I’ve learned of your letter that you want to know about the Double Seventh Festival. Now I’m writing to tell you about it.
The Double Seventh Festival, also know as the Qiqiao Festival, is the most romantic traditional Chinese festival. It falls annual on the 7th day of the 7th lunar month. The festival came from a ancient Chinese romantic fairy tale about the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, who has deeply moved generation of Chinese people. Many men and women in the love usually pray for a happy marriage on that night, hoping for a happy ending to his true love. Today, many young couples in China celebrate the Double Seventh Festival in Chinese Valentine’s Day.
I hope my explanation can make you understood our traditional festivals and cultures better.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear John,
In your letter, you asked me about traditionally Chinese festivals. Now I would like to tell you something about the most important festival in China- the Spring Festival.
Few days before the festival, houses are cleaned and red couplets are stick. We put on our fancy clothes and setted off firecrackers during the festival. Beside, presents and big dinners are prepared for to celebrate the happy reunion of family and relative. They have dumplings and enjoy the Spring Festival Gala on Lunar New Year’s Eve. Customs may vary from place to place, and the same happy atmosphere is to be found anywhere in the country.
Now, I hope you have some idea of our Spring Festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
It is interested to visit another country, but sometimes there are some questions when we don’t know the language very well. It may be difficult to talk about the people there. We may not know how to use the telephone in the country which are visiting. We may not know what to buy the things we need. In a strange country we may not know where to eat and what to order in a restaurant. It is not easy to decide how many money to tip (付小费) waiters or taxi drivers. When we are helpful，we may not know how to ask help. After a short time later, however, we learn what to do and what to say. We learn to enjoy life in another country, and then we may be sorry to leave both the place and the people.
Dear Tom，
I heard that you've just moved here. As one of our traditional festival and the one that receives great popularity，today was the Dragon Boat Festival. Fall on the 5th day of the lunar month of May every year，it is set in praise on an ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan. Her poems are supposed inspire people's love of their country. Zongzi，boiling rice wrapped by bamboo leaves，is the famously food that you can't miss during the festival. Since you are busy with your work all the day long，I have specially cooked some for you. Unless it is convenient，I'll give it to you tonight. I'll be very happy if you like it.
Yours，
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I heard that you’ve just moved here. As one of our traditional festival and the one that receives great popularity, today is the Dragon Boat Festival. Fall on the 5th day of the lunar month of May every year, it is set in praise on an ancient Chinese poet Qu Yuan. Her poems are supposed inspire people’s love of their country. Zongzi, boiling rice wrapped by bamboo leaves, are the famous food that you can’t miss during the festival. Since you are busy with your work all the day long, I have special cooked some for you. Unless it is convenient, I’ll give it to you tonight. I’ll be very happy if you like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As Christmas is coming, I plan to buy something for my parent. What I want to give back is a VIP card of a health club but neither of them is doing enough exercise. My father works very hardly as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often bury herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.
I want to give them this card to express my love and thanks for them. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends here. At the same time, I hope that they can take care their health.
