增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After I graduated from junior high school, my parents and I go to Thailand for a trip. It was my the most unforgettable trip. I enjoyed so delicious fresh fruit and seafood that I was unwilling go home. While going for sightseeing, I saw the beautiful sunset on the beach and met much local people. They could speak fluently Chinese and English, which made me surprising. This trip not only taught me a lot of knowledge who I had never learned in books, but opened your eyes to a new world. As the saying goes, “It's nice to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to the park with my friends. At the gate I come across some American tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know about that they were college students study in China. They were busy taking pictures and were deeply impressing by the changes what had taken place. Before that, we visited a beautiful garden and had good time. We exchanged our e-mail address so that we could keep in touch. I was very gladly to have had a chance to practice my oral English.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hello Tina,
l'm very pleased to know you were coming to visit us here in China. I know you are really interesting in animals, so I suggest that we visit Chengdu, a beautiful and attractively city in Sichuan Province. We can see pandas in the park near of Chengdu. We can also visited Du Fu's Thatched Cottage (Du Fu Caotang) , which іѕ оnе оf mу fаvоurіtе рlасеѕ. Du Fu wаѕ оnе оf mоѕt fаmоuѕ роеtѕ( 诗人) іn Сhіnеѕе hіѕtоrу. Не lіvеd there for several year. After he died, it becomes a place for people to remember him. It is a traditional Chinese garden as well as a beautiful but quiet place, excellent for reading and thought.
I hope you like my suggestion.
Love,
Weiwei
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\），在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用横线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The Olympic Games will be held in our country in four years' time. As a great many of people will be visiting the country, the government will be building new hotels, a immense stadium, but a new Olympic-standard swimming pool. They will also be building new road and a special railway line. The Games will be held just outside the capital and the whole area will be called 'Olympic City'. Workers will have complete the new roads at the end of this year. By the end of next year, they will have finished work on the new stadium. The fantastic modern buildings have been designed by Kurt Gunter. Everybody will be watching anxious as the new buildings go up. We are all very exciting and are looking forward the Olympic Games so they have never been held before in this country.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I have just receive a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been to there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is work for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different place in Australia. He has just bought an Australia car and has gone to Alice springs, a small town in centre of Australia. He will soon visits Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. His brother has never been abroad before, but he is finding this trip very excited.
增加:在缺词处加-一个漏词符号( ˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I want to share my terrible trip with you. I visited the marine park with my friends yesterday. I am sorry to say that I was disappointed with the service provide by the staff. When I came up to one of the waitresses to ask the way, he was rather impatient, respond slowly and unwillingly. What's worse, the waitress even laughed me when I was about to leave. Besides, the steak 1 was ordered in the restaurant was so tough and salty which I could hardly enjoy it. Al that time, the service also makes other customers disappointed. I sincere hope that the person in charge will take measure to improve the service.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Traveling had become increasingly popular over the years. Perhaps one of the big reasons is that it makes people feel refreshed. Other reason is that it allows us to escape our lives. Sometimes, what our mind really need is a break from the same atmosphere. When we travel, more often than not, we will spend great deal of time outdoors, that is the best medicine for a mind locked indoors for most of the time. But traveling allows us to adopt to new perspectives. Strange enough, it's when we take a break from our problems that they sometimes manage to find solutions to them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, I went to Shangri-la for travel. It was the nice trip, during which I not only saw the beautiful scenery, and also made a good friend. She was come from England and was a middle school student either. We met in the tourist site where she asked me to translate which she said. Though my English was not very good, I can still understand what she said. Then we talked a lot while appreciated sights all the way. She told me about her joy trip in China. I listened to her carefully and I was attracted by her different kinds of story. Now we still keep touch with each other by email.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer I go to Hangzhou with two Americans. I became their guide. First, we went to the West Lake, that is a famous place of interest in Hangzhou. We looked around it by the boat. After that, we went shop. The sellers couldn’t speak English. Though it was very harder, I tried my best to listen their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought many things with their help. Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures. When we felt hungry, we went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old house. All of us had a greatly time that day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. Which is known to everyone, it’s the famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very exciting. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting palaces and temples, and told stories. On the way I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came before we knew it. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. We all thought Emei Mountain was worth of visiting.
