Dear Sally,
I am extreme pleased that you are visiting Xi’an this summer vacation. I’d like to express your warm welcome and offer you a few suggestion. Xi’an had a long history and 13 dynasties, included Western Zhou, Qin, Western Han, Sui and Tang, made Xi’an their capital. There are plenty of places of interest in Xi’an, among where the Terracotta Army is the most attractive. Besides, visiting the Big Wild Goose Pagoda and Shaanxi History Museum are the best choice. If you are hiking lover, you can climb the Cuihua Mountain, on top of which you can get a wonder view of our city. By the way, you had better to taste famous Xi’an snacks.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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When I was young I want to become a traveler, so I really liked reading books which were introduced Many countries. They are so many places where I want to go, but if I must choose only one place, my choose is Morocco. There are three reasons why the Morocco is my favorite place. Firstly, Morocco is country in North African. I have never been to African, and I think there are many mysteries on this land than Asia or Europe. Secondly, Morocco is a famous place where many movies was made, such as ‘Casablanca’. Morocco had many nice places for sightseeing. Lastly, Morocco is much developing in business. I like all developed cities, besides they are always full of life. When I think over Casablanca or New York or other cities like them, I just feel very excitedly.
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My dear classmates, it’s our honor to introduce the Imperial Palace, a Chinese cultural heritage what enjoys a high reputation in the world. The magnificent and well-preserved architecture, also known for the Forbidden City, represent the highest architectural level in ancient China. With a history of about 600 years, it was lies in the center of Beijing, see great changes of this city. Nowadays, it has become a must-see scenic spots that attracts an enormously number of visitors every year.
If we have a chance visit the Imperial Palace one day, please keep in mind that in any case should we leave any marks on the cultural relics.
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It is excited to visit different places. As you travel, you will see beautiful sceneries and you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Besides, you can get to know the customs and living habits of the local people. Today people are very fond of traveling that tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries. The main reason that people travel is, perhaps, for pleasure. For example, having worked hardly throughout the weekdays, people will go on a trip to the nearby mountains or beaches to have a good rest.
For another example, spending a holiday travel abroad is especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much chance to be away from their homelands. When people return back from their travel, they will generally feel fresh and energetic, ready to work harder. Travel is also one of the best means of learning. You may have read or hear about something, and you can never get an accurate picture of it until you see it for yourself.
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The Xi’an Forest of Stone Tablets, initially set up in the 1087, was official named in the Qing Dynasty. It is an art treasure house where is composed of more than 3,000 stone tablets from the Han Dynasty through the Qing Dynasty. The museum is naming “Forest of Stone Tablets” because the numerous stone tablets housing in the museum look like a dense forest. The museum was a treasure house of ancient Chinese calligraphy as well as a good collection of historical documents and stone carvings in various styles. Moreover, the tablets bear evidences to the cultural exchanges in ancient China and show the great achievements of that period. However, for the visitors to Xi’an, the Forest of Stone Tablets is of great attraction in addition terracotta warriors. We will surely be impressed by its rich culture.
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Sunday May 4 Sunny
It was the first time I had been to countryside. At 9 o'clock in the morning I started out with several classmates. In the way we saw rice fields and trees on all sides of the road. Factories, shops, and schools had been built in many village. From ten to twelve we visited ten families. We told that many farmers had planted vegetables and raise silkworms (蚕) and they had become rich. Some even bought color TV sets. The life of the farmers had been great improved. It was said that some America friends would come to visit their village. We are greatly inspired by the achievements they had made them in recent years.
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Good tourist behavior is of great important for everyone. Cultural and natural sights belong to everyone, included the generations to come and good tourist behavior can help protect. Beside, good tourist behavior can make you have a more enjoy travelling experience. However, some tourists threw away rubbish everywhere. Some take photos which it's strictly forbidden. And others even write or draw anything on the tourist attraction.
It's not hard to give up such bad behavior as long as tourists realise it is harm to the sights. So firstly, the mass media have the responsibility of letting people to know what a good tourist is like. Secondly, tour guides should remind tourists local customs during the journey.
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I spent the National Day Golden Week holiday traveled around Guilin，Guangxi with Mike and Tom，exchange students from Germany．We visited many popular tourist spot．The last destination of our vocation was Longji Rice Terraces in Longsheng county．The rice terrace is a well-known tourist place，where attracts visitors from home and in abroad．We admired a way people have worked in harmony to nature to make these traces and grow rice．Mike showed great interest Zhuang people's traditions．Amusingly，Tom's favorite seemed to be Guilin rice noodles serving at the guesthouse．We had so much fun and we' re already talking about their next holiday!
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I had a great time during my last camping trip. Actual, I didn’t plan to go but some friends ring me at the last minute and invited me. A place was very beautiful, but the beach below was really lovely. We watched the sun went down over the horizon every night. Mary was brought her guitar, and she played very beautifully. It was pleasant to listen her. Unfortunately, John had never gone camping, and he was allergic to tree and flowers. We had to take her to the doctor on the third day and we were really worrying, but he was OK. I’ll never forget the trip.
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Hello Tina,
l'm very pleased to know you were coming to visit us here in China. I know you are really interesting in animals, so I suggest that we visit Chengdu, a beautiful and attractively city in Sichuan Province. We can see pandas in the park near of Chengdu. We can also visited Du Fu's Thatched Cottage (Du Fu Caotang) , which іѕ оnе оf mу fаvоurіtе рlасеѕ. Du Fu wаѕ оnе оf mоѕt fаmоuѕ роеtѕ( 诗人) іn Сhіnеѕе hіѕtоrу. Не lіvеd there for several year. After he died, it becomes a place for people to remember him. It is a traditional Chinese garden as well as a beautiful but quiet place, excellent for reading and thought.
I hope you like my suggestion.
Love,
Weiwei
