增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
The other day my parents and I took trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As is known, it’s a famous mountain with different kind of plants and animals. The weather was fine and we were on high spirits. It was about noon while we arrived at the foot of the mountain. We were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we feed monkeys, visited temples and told stories. On the way up, I was busy took photos since the scenery was beautiful and attractively. Time passed quickly, and before we knew it, night has fallen. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep the moment my head touched at the pillow.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you ask about in the last e-mail.
Edinburgh, located in the southeast of Scotland, was the capital city of Scotland as well as their political and cultural center. It covers a area of 264 square kilometers with only a small population 1. 33 million. With the airport lain in the center of the city, it is convenient for people to go around. Close to the seaside, Edinburgh has a mild climate, that makes it one of the most popular tourism city in the UK. It also has absolute splendid ancient architecture, like the Edinburgh Castle.
I will be happy to guide you around our city if you will come here.
Yours,
Harry
Last summer, my friend and I went to his hometown in bus to spend the vacation. It was a seaside village, one of the more popular tourist attractions in the area. When we arrived there, I deeply impressed by its beauty. In the morning, we got up early and took a walk on the beach, which a lot of tourists were taking photo. In the afternoon, we often go swimming and played the volleyball with some local kids. In the evening, we always sat on the softly sand, watching waves coming and going. It was quite a relaxed holiday. We enjoyed us very much.
Last week, I paid a visit a newlyopened riverside park, where is located in the southeast of the city. The sky is clear and blue. I took a freely walk in the park,with a gentle wind touch my face. The flowers along the path were impressed me a lot. The beautiful scenery gave me a sense of refresh and life. Along the way, I took such many photos that my cellphone ran out of power in the end. The trip helped us recover from the busy schedule. What amazing the power of nature is! I'm looking forward to one more trip.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用斜线(\))划掉。
修改∶在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I went on the trip to Qingdao, where I stayed for seven days and enjoyed myself. Before leave Qingdao, I went fishing on a beautiful lake. Unlucky, I didn't catch any fishes, and I got boring. I decided to go swimming. When I stood up, my wallet with all my money in fell into the water. I jump into the deep lake to look for it, so I found nothing. The next morning, I wasn't able to leave the hotel because of I had no money to pay for anything. I had no choice but call my parents and asked for help. They sent myself some money by WeChat. How an embarrassing trip!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My classmates and I visited the city museum on last Friday, where an exhibition of the traditional Chinese folk handicrafts was going on. A great many crafted items were on display, so each of them had a unique style. While admiring them, we feel proud of the wisdoms of the Chinese people. Besides, some craftsmen invited to show how to make them, which was very impressive. We were such amazed that we couldn't tear us away. We thought the exhibition was well worth visited. It was the trip to the museum which helped us to learn more about the Chinese art and culture. It is wide acknowledged that appreciating one's own culture is important for understanding oneself.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
I have just receive a letter from my brother, Tim. He is in Australia. He has been to there for six months. Tim is an engineer. He is work for a big firm and he has already visited a great number of different place in Australia. He has just bought an Australia car and has gone to Alice springs, a small town in centre of Australia. He will soon visits Darwin. From there, he will fly to Perth. His brother has never been abroad before, but he is finding this trip very excited.
Last summer, my friend and me visited Beijing’s Hutongs, which made us have the deep understanding of Beijing. The Hutongs mainly built during the Ming and Qing dynasties. Nobody know exactly how many Hutongs there are in Beijing. If we connected all Hutongs together, and the total length would even be long than the Great Wall. As is known, the Great Wall is about 4,000 mile long. Some Hutongs are such narrow that a person like me, in order to get through, has to walk sideways. And some Hutongs have more than 20 turns. With our delight, some are well preserved, where we can experience typically life of old Beijing locals
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
②只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recent, we have discussed the ways of traveling. Here is a result. Some students choose to travel with a group. With a guide help, they won't get lost and they don't need to look up for hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while take a trip.
However, other students prefer travel alone. That's why they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite tourist spots. What's more, it's a chance for us to learn to look after themselves.
For me, I'd like to travel alone. I wanted to spend enough time visiting the place where I like. In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There is a Chinese saying goes like this: Traveling ten thousand li is better than reading ten thousand books. Indeed, travel benefit us a lot.
Firstly, travel broadens our mind and enriches our knowledges. We can experience more about the outside world by traveling. Secondly, we feel more relaxing when traveling, what is good for our body and health. Naturally, we will become more energetically after a much pleasant travel. In addition, we are more likely to make new friends on your journey.
To sum up, travel is really good to us. If possible, I wish I could travel around world in my lifetime.