增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出增加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
The famous environmentalist, Professor Jin , was invited deliver a speech in our school last Friday He started with an universally accepted theory explaining how the Earth began. We were shocking that there was so many kinds of living things on the planet a long time ago, Besides, he also showed how the disappear of some species happened later. It was human activities that large changed the global environment. He pointed out we should attach great importance to protect the environment, which decided that we would be able to continue to live on this planet in the future. I was deeply impressed by her speech and I think of it is important to protect our only home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since last year, the haze (霜)weather had happened many times in my hometown, when it has done great harm to our life. What’s worse, many people have to see the doctor due with serious diseases caused by the haze.
People have realized the harm effects on their health and the importance of protect the environment. Measures have taken to reduce the haze. The government suggests each citizen goes to work by public transport.
As for me, I go to school by bike and on foot every day. Besides, I will tell the others to protect the environment, too. Now, it’s time for each of us to contribute to the environmental protection, doesn’t it?
The environment pollution was more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink it because of water pollution. And when trees cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People’s health has been great affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people have died of diseases causing by pollution. In order to live the better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.
Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, that saves money and reduces pollution. Use things so long as possible. Don’t use plastic bag. Besides, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting it down. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
There is a extremely annoying phenomenon that many students litter in our school. Not only it bad for our health but it also makes our school more and less beautiful. Therefore, our school is going to hold an activity themed “Stop Littering in Our School”. The activity will surely leave an unforgettably impression on those who take part on it. In the activity, we will first to walk around the school to see however serious the littering problem is. After that, we will be divided into groups to pick up rubbishes. Through this activity, we are expected to realize the importance of protect the living environment in our school but stop littering in our school.
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
World Environment Day falls on June 5 every year. It expressed our pursuit for a better environment. It is also one of the ways that for the United Nations to raise global environmental awareness and take measure.
As young students, we should advocate environmental protection but start from the things around us. They include maintaining personal and environmental hygiene, caring for every plant and tree in the school, and participate in various public welfare activities that cares for nature.
In addition, while caring for an environment, we should active follow the rules of the school. Try to be good students with good manners, what will also contribute the construction of the most beautiful campus.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I was walking around the park while I saw some rubbish leaving on the ground. People just walk by as if they had not seen it. I thought I would do something differently. I picked up and put it into a nearby dustbin. I was felt nice because I saw someone else doing a same thing as I had just done. I thought my kind had affected him. Saving the Earth is saving us humans. It is a good lesson what we should learn in life and together we can make the Earth a good place to live on one step at a time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,每句中最多有两处错误;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday, we have had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our autumn trip. We came up several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we left to the mountain early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful sceneries. However, when we reached the top, we were shocking to see rubbish here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. We felt sadly that many tourists didn't take good care of nature. Soon, they started to pick them up. With all the rubbish putting in the rubbish bin, the place looked many more beautiful than before.
When we came back, it was 5:30 in the afternoon. We were tired and happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To support the activity named “Green Travel, Start With Me”, I talked to my parent about it. They were very supportive, saying they would be devoted to environment protection. In the following weeks, as we promised, he went to school by bike every day, while my parents went work by bus. Though we were tired, we all felt happily. Last Friday ago, a class meeting was hold. Some parents were invited, include my father and mother. We share various ideas during the meetings. All of us had a same view that environment protection is very importance for us.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss what we were going to do on the weekend. We came up with several ideas such going to a park, climbing a mountain, and go boating. Final, we decided to climb a mountain where is close to our school.
The next day, we left early in the morning. Along the way, we enjoyed the warm sunshines and beautiful nature. However, when we reached the mountain top, we were shocking to see rubbish here or there. Then we asked the other tourists to join in us to pick up the rubbish.
We collect and put the rubbish in our paper bags. They were tired but felt very happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
March 11, 2011 was a holiday in Japan. Everything was going on like usual. Most people were at home while there came an extreme loud sound like thunder. Next, people's houses began to shake. Buildings cracked and water pipes bursting. In the town of Fukushima (福岛), the main street went up into the air, ten feet holes opened up in the ground, and buildings fell into ruins. People were shocking by the unexpected quake. Some ran up and down the street, while others were trapped in the buildings were looking out their windows for help. An earthquake that hit Japan was one of the strongest disaster in the world. Many towns were destroyed in the earthquake and a great number of people was killed. Most seriously, Fukushima nuclear accident happened.