增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, I discover I couldn’t move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I could try acupuncture (针灸). So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a acute pain. Two weeks went by after I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health to other people.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Recently, there has been an activity of "doing your bit for an energy-saved society’’ in our school. Our schoolmates were highly concerned with the increasing lack for energy and provide their own advice.
Many a student propose that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easily to get. Meanwhile, some other students think that advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Therefore, it is also strongly recommended those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates not be thrown away and be recycled. After all, most of these books are still in a good condition.
Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do. All of these will definitely make a contribution to build a better world.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yuan Longping is known for the father of hybrid rice. He devotes his life to make not only China but also the world free from hunger. He has two dreams. One is to enjoy the cool under the rice tree. The other is that his hybrid rice can be grown global. But turning dreams into reality are hard to achieve, what takes a lot of time and efforts. For me, my dream is to be English teacher. I wish to spread this story of some Chinese heroes to the world. And I wish my students can value food or be grateful to Yuan Longping as well. In order to make my dream came true, all the things I have to do it are to work hard.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we know, shared bikes have been made our lives much more convenient. However, we can often see some shared bikes placed messy everywhere. When I talked about this with my classmates last week, we all felt upset but decided to make the change. On Sunday morning, we gather outside the railway station. First, we began dealing shared bikes and tried to put them in order. People who passed by praised that we did. Seeing the bikes in rows again, they felt proud. Then, to encourage people to behave themselves, we put up a larger sign saying “Please Be Civilized While Using A Shared Bike”. Of course, we drew much attention from many passer-by while that also meant our actions would surely make a difference.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have learnt that our English association need some volunteers to meet the visiting British student and I want to apply for the position. Firstly, I can speak fluently English and have little difficulty communicate with English speakers, which will make my work easier. Secondly, I show a group of Americans around our campus last year. This experience will be enable me to do better this year. It is certain that I am suitable the job. Thirdly, my communication skill will help them have the better understanding of Chinese culture. I would appreciate it while you could take my application into account or give me the chance.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my childhood, my family didn’t have a lot of money, so we had to be creative when it came to be entertainment. One of our favorite thing to do on weekends were to go to the park and have a picnic. My mom would pack sandwiches, fruit, and cookies, and they would bring a frisbee and a soccer ball play with. We would spend hours running around but having fun. It didn’t matter which we didn’t have expensively toys. We were happy just spending time together in the fresh air. Looked back, I know those simple picnics are some of my fonder memories in my childhood.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
What would life like without music? I wonder how music started and when we first become interested in music. Music is a essential part of my day. It changes my feeling and put me in a good mood. There’s nothing good to do on a train or bus than put on my headphones to listen to my favorite music. I like all type of music, from classical music and opera for jazz and rock. I’m always looking for something that sounds amazed. Sometimes I hear a song or piece of music on the radio or on TV I enjoy it very much. I always use my pocket money to pay online to download and saving the music.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good morning, everyone! I feel delight to share some of my views here. Being a better self, I think, mean more than being excellent in study but being a all-round person.
To be a better self, we should recognize us correctly by knowing our strengths and weakness. Based on self-recognition, we need to take action to enhance that we are good at and gain experience our failures. We need to keep a good state of mind but believe ourselves. It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate proper and address difficulties.
Let’s strive with our utmost efforts. I’m convinced that you can, and I can, to be a better self. Thank you!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
On a bright November day, a graceful English lady walk into a cozy bookshop in the heart of London’s Chinatown. She picked up a orderly pile of New Year cards and calendars decorating with beautiful Chinese paper cutting patterns and Chinese ink paintings. Then she warm greeted the shop assistant. The lady was 91-year-old Pamela Youde whose husband was the late Sir Edward Youde, which served as the governor of Hong Kong between 1982 and in 1986. For several decade, Youde has been a loyal customer of Guanghwa Bookshop. Every winter, apart from buy New Year cards from Guanghwa for her friends and family, he also buys Chinese calendars for each of her four grandchildren. She expects help them learn Mandarin well.