增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone! I feel delight to share some of my views here. Being a better self, I think, mean more than being excellent in study but being a all-round person.
To be a better self, we should recognize us correctly by knowing our strengths and weakness. Based on self-recognition, we need to take action to enhance that we are good at and gain experience our failures. We need to keep a good state of mind but believe ourselves. It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate proper and address difficulties.
Let’s strive with our utmost efforts. I’m convinced that you can, and I can, to be a better self. Thank you!
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：把错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone tends have many problems while gaining knowledge．Therefore，your willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it out．What I’d like to share is my approaches to solve the problems．
First，you must focus on which you are faced with．There seems to be a lot of attractive things，like computers or game．To stay focused，you can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing your work．Second，believe to yourself．Though there is no doubt that each of us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning，but it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence．
Last，keep modest．Never fee1 embarrassing to turn to your teachers or classmates．
Everyone in your surroundings can be your teacher．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays Senior two students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. To reduce it, the followed suggestions may help. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high. In another words, don't put too much pressure yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Eventually, make friend with others, such as your classmates, your teachers and your parents. They will understand you and came to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I’d like to offer you any advice.
Firstly, it’s normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you’re friendly to the others.
I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
