1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the last Spring Festival, I get lots of money by snatching(抢)the red envelope through WeChat. But now I am losing in thought --- whether it really does good to people, especial young children, since the smartphone is now so popular. From his point of view, it will do more harms than good to young children unless they are addicted to snatching the red envelope. On the one hand, they will think it’s such easy to get much money. Just by snatching they can get it. On other hand, spending too much time on the things that they have nothing to do with their studies will never benefit them. It’s bad for either young people’s mental health but physical health.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the last Spring Festival, I get lots of money by snatching(抢)the red envelope through WeChat. But now I am losing in thought --- whether it really does good to people, especial young children, since the smartphone is now so popular. From his point of view, it will do more harms than good to young children unless they are addicted to snatching the red envelope. On the one hand, they will think it’s such easy to get much money. Just by snatching they can get it. On other hand, spending too much time on the things that they have nothing to do with their studies will never benefit them. It’s bad for either young people’s mental health but physical health.
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