增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On making friends
In life we can hardly do without friends. There are many difficulty and problems that we can’t overcome with only their own efforts. Moreover, we need friends to share with our joys and sorrows; otherwise, we will suffer from loneliness. However, all friends can help us when we are in great need. So what on earth is true friendship? As a popular saying went, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” True friends are those which never desert you when you are in need. On a contrary, they will offer you sincerely help even at the cost of their own interests. Beside, they will encourage you to stick to what is right or avoid what is wrong or illegal. In conclusion, true friendship lies in sincerity and self-sacrifice.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A man had two sons. The younger one said to his father, ‘Father, give me my part of the wealthy.’ But the father divided his property between them. Not many days later, the younger son got all which he had, leave for a distant country where he spent everything. Then a severe famine hit that country, and he was on need. So he had joined himself to a citizen who sent her to feed pigs. And he would glad to fill his stomach with pigs’ food. When he came to himself, he went back and said to his father: “Father, I am no longer worthy to be called your son; treat me as one of your hired servant.” But his father was filling with compassion and threw his arms around him and kissed him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
On a bright November day, a graceful English lady walk into a cozy bookshop in the heart of London’s Chinatown. She picked up a orderly pile of New Year cards and calendars decorating with beautiful Chinese paper cutting patterns and Chinese ink paintings. Then she warm greeted the shop assistant. The lady was 91-year-old Pamela Youde whose husband was the late Sir Edward Youde, which served as the governor of Hong Kong between 1982 and in 1986. For several decade, Youde has been a loyal customer of Guanghwa Bookshop. Every winter, apart from buy New Year cards from Guanghwa for her friends and family, he also buys Chinese calendars for each of her four grandchildren. She expects help them learn Mandarin well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
While in New Zealand as an exchange student, I stay with a host family. My host parents organized many activities for me at my spare time to relieve my homesickness. However, life in New Zealand isn’t easily to me. My main problem was the language, I was failed to understand much and that lasted for several week. Fortunately, I soon made several friends, whom help made me adapt gradually. They talked about life both in China and in New Zealand, learn more about each other’s culture. Now back home, I still remember the life here. For me, it is unique and valuable experience.
There was a time that I lived in poverty in a remote mountainous area. At that time, we had only a few for three meals a day. My families persuaded my brother to drop out of school to work and let me to continue schooling. Thanks to my teachers who stayed there for decades to educate our students, I successfully admitted to the university. Additional, our elderly village leader helped the villagers move to the plains and invites experts to teach our villagers to plant better and more rice, helping them get rid of poverty with their hard-working hands. Now everyone is living a life with plenty of food and clothing, and I am honorably a village cadre, continue the old man’s unfulfilled mission and leading the villagers to a good life.