Dear Jackie
The school holidays are drawing to near. I feel very exciting at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holidays. It's the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your helping. I'd like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such for mountains, rivers or forests, which I could enjoy the beauty of nature. Could you suggest several place for me to visit? Beside, I prefer to live in a hotel and I hoped the traffic isn't too heavy. Perhaps you could help me book hotel.
I’m expecting to hear from you, and I'm looking forward to meet you in America.
Yours
Li hua
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I am always told to working hard to have a good life in the future. Therefore ,I do my best to play basketball or study. I want to be basketball player when I grow up. To realize my dream, I practice with playing basketball regular , aiming to make my best shots. Although I'm interesting in watching TV , we manage to finish my homework first. I try my best in all the tests , especially in the math test because I found math more difficult than any other subjects. Anyway I will spare no effort and never give in on my study. I believe if I am sure 10 succeed.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ve had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”. In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
