增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m sorry to say that I can’t go to Wuzhen with you as planning. I’m writing to apologize for breaking my promise. I had been expecting to visit Wuzhen with you, where we can get close to the nature and experience local customs. However, I can’t travel recent because I hurt my leg in an accident. That is because I think it is a good choice for us to put away our travel. I would appreciate if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenience for you, shall we travel there in our summer vacations this year? If not, please keep me informed of what time suited you best in advance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have watched a plenty of documentaries about Shanghai and I had been dying to go there. If I have a chance to go sightseeing there, I’ll make a detailed plan based on my knowledge about the city. I’ll walk along the Bund, which I can see many western-style buildings. For lunch, we would like to eat some delicious snack in Yu Garden. After lunch, I plan to visit the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, which is the seventh high tower in the world. Besides, I will also climb to the top of that tower to have a view of the whole modernly city. Only by this way can I have better understanding of it. I hope my wish to visit Shanghai will be realizing this year.
增加: 在缺词处加个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With my college life approach, in order to get used to college life quickly, I should prepared myself for that from now on. To begin with, when entering into college, I will set new goals for my studies and stick to it until I succeed. What’s more, since I’m away from home, it is necessary for me learn to live independently. In my spare time, I will take part in a variety of activity. Additionally, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college are another challenge for me, and for sure I’ll make it. I have a strong belief what my college life will be absolute wonderful.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The summer holiday is coming, but it makes me very excitedly. I have been looking forward to relax myself and I’d like to go fishing and climb high mountains. Ride my bicycle is also good for me. I think I can play football or play the chess with my father as well. How a wonderful time I will have during the summer holiday! But my father had different opinions. He does not want me to go out. He’s afraid I’ll be knocking down by a truck, fall into rivers, fall off a tree or fight with others. What’s worse, he’s afraid I will be kidnapped. I hate kept in a cage like a bird. I need freedom and I will try his best to persuade my father.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10处，多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world and about human beings. Knowledge is a source of pleasure for me. I want to study at a college for the fun to knowledge. I know the college education can prepare me better for my future. Better education meant, in my opinion, better jobs, better opportunity and better choices. I want to go to college because I know that my parents and other people care for me will be happily with that. Unless I can study at a nice university, I will make them happier. I’d hate to let you down. That’s the reason why I must go to college.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear David,
I had something what was unexpected at the last minute. My parent were injured in a car accident. So I have to look after him and can’t meet you and Black Smith in Monday. I am available late Tuesday and Thursday afternoons and I’d like to arrange for our meeting to held later in the week. As a matter of fact, the early morning of Wednesday or Friday would actual be best for me. We could still meet at the Black’s office as we planned. Or we could meet somewhere else whether it’s more convenient for you. I am sorry that I had to cancel the meeting. Please calling me as soon as you can after you read this.
Yours,
Ted
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dream is important in our life. It encouraged us to fight for the future. My dream is to be a English teacher. I am grateful to all my teacher. They teach me not only knowledge, also how to adapt themselves to the society. Therefore, I want to be a teacher which is useful to his students. To be a good English teacher, I need to study hardly and learn English well. Then I need to practice my spoken English by communicating with my classmates on English. All in all, I believe my dream will to come true and I will try my better to achieve my dream.
Dear Li Ming，
The summer holiday is around corner. Do you have any plan for them？I plan to read some English book during the holiday and I needed your recommendations.
Firstly, I want to improve my English level, hope one day I can go to abroad for further study in other countries, such as America and England. Secondly, I also desires to know more history, geography as good as cultures and traditions about these countries. But can you make a list of the books of me to read？Thank you sincerely in advance.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is it going in the UK? I was planning a trip to London with my parents next month.
As the matter of fact, I intend to travel to London so as experience different cultures, which might be helpful for me to broaden my horizons. Also, I am eager to improve my speaking English by communicating with foreigner. Most important, I will get a chance to meet you or enjoy a different lifestyle. Despite of good hopes, I have no idea that is worth visiting or how to behave properly. Could you introduce some places of interest and some customs to me?
Looking forward to you early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I hope I can be a excellent cook when I grow up because I enjoy cooking but I want to bring happiness to people who taste my food. I still remember clearly that happened when I cooked for the first time. I almost had my finger cutting when I cut onions and made a mess of the kitchen. Worse still, the dish I cooked tasted so terribly that I even think about giving up. Thanks for my mother’s encouragement and patient guidance, I continued practising cooking at home whenever I had time. Only then I able to improve my cooking skills gradually. I’ll try my best to learn and improve my cooking skills in order that to make your dream come true. And I believe I can make it!
