1 . 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分
Dear sir,

I’m LiMing, a student from No.2 middle school. I’m writing to recommend me as a volunteer for 2022 Winter Olympic Games to be held in Beijing and Zhangjiakou. Here comes my advantages.

To begin with, I love sports and play sports has been an important part of my life. However, I have a good command of English, that makes it easier for me to communicate with foreign guests. What’s more, I am friendly and patient, but I can get along with others easy. More importantly, I consider it a good chance to serve for our society and develop my ability. I would appreciate it if you could give me a opportunity.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiMing