增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making tradition handicrafts.
Sewing is one of my favorite course where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knit a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. It was sure a rewarding and fulfilling experience, that not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring.
The hands-on courses have won a popularity among students and had a positive effect to the personal growth of everyone involved. If possible, an exhibition could be held to demonstrate students well-designed works and displayed their creativity.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning I was late for school so I became caught in a serious traffic jam in my way to school. The traffic jam was causing by an accident. A girl hit by a bus while she was crossed the road. She was in so a hurry that she ran a red light. Just as she was crossing, a bus turned into my bike. It was too late for her to stop her bike so she is knocked over. She hurt her leg very badly. I think this accident is not a good lesson for all of us. It tells us the important of obeying the traffic rules even when we are in a hurry.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known to all food waste on campus has become more and more seriously, which cause great concern. Faced the problem, I think some effective measure should be taken. First of all, we should order a proper amount of food such that we can eat them up. What’s more, we were supposed to form a good eating habit, which is great benefit to our health. Last but not least, we can call on fewer schoolmates to fight against food waste. In a brief, it is high time that we took action to reduce food waste. Let’s do it now.