This morning, I was jogging in the park while I caught sight of a wallet on a bench. Clear, someone had left it there in accident. I picked up and checked the contents. Inside it, I found some money or a card with a phone number. Believing that the owner would be worried, I immediately try the number. A man answered it in an anxious voice. Hearing that I had his wallet, he sighed with relief and told me he would come right away. Ten minutes late, the man arrived. After confirm he was the owner, I returned the wallet back to him. With his thumb up, he expressed his thanks to me repeatedly. Seen the smile on his face, I felt happy that I was able to help.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day when we were playing the basketball, I saw Tim wearing a pair sneaker of my style. I thought they were my shoes, so I shouted angry and blamed him for using my personal possessions without permit. Then I went back to the dorm after he could say anything. I opened the door only to find mine own sneakers just under my bed. For a while, I stood there still, shocking and guilty. When realizing my act must have hurt him, immediately I rush to the court to apology to him sincerely. Fortunately, though he was angry and sad, he pardoned me. With my relief, the conflict ended happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ )并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I experienced something exciting on my way school last Friday. I saw the 50-yuan note drop from an old lady’s pocket and I want to remind her. The old lady, therefore, didn’t seem to understand what I was talking about, which made me very embarrassing. My friend, Wang Qiang, just saw what had been happened. He picked up the notes, went towards the old lady, and asked if she had lost some money or not. The old lady checked her pocket. and realized it was his money. She praised both of us after learn about the whole process.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday,I was walked my dog in the evening when I saw the poor child who was selling some key chains.He had five key chains and asked for me to buy one.I asked myself,“Is he selling this build a house?”My heart answered,“No,this is for satisfying his hungry tonight.”I bought all the key chain and offered him milk and biscuits.I gave her a smiley key chain back as a gift,but his smile was awesome.I feel great satisfaction in my heart at that moment.I believe that life will be successfully if you win a smile from someone.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Linda's father bought her a new bike the day before yesterday, what made her very exciting. Then she began to ride it fast on the road. Seen a man getting close to her, Linda couldn't stop it. As the result, she knocked the man off . Because the man was very kind, so he didn't scold (责备) her at all. Instead, he told her how dangerously it was to ride a bike so fast. He asked her to keep the lesson in mind. Linda felt regretful but ashamed. She promised keep the lesson in mind forever. Then, the man bent down and begin to repair her bike. After a while, he got them repaired. Linda was greatly moved. She thanked the man and left happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a warm story to share with you. The school in San Francisco not only accepted a deaf student, but also teach the entire class sign language to allow them to better communicate with him.
It was in September last year when a woman asked the primary school to accept her six-year-old son, James, who, unfortunate, has a hearing disability. The teacher, Lily, was agreed almost immediately. Therefore, on the first day of school, she noticed James sit all by himself, unable to communicate with any of his classmates. To find a solution, he came up with a brilliant idea — getting the whole class to learn sign language along with James. So they got a sign language teacher on board. And a couple of month later, James was able to communicate all his classmates about homework and games.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Babe is one of my closest friend now. Whenever I feel down, I enjoy his company. Whenever he is in trouble, I would like help him. Actually, he was an abandoning cat. I rescued him from hard situations and nursed him back to health. It was in my friend's backyard which I found him. Then he was a baby of less than a month who he looked so skinny and sick. Seen him trembling with cold, I took him in with hesitation. Now he is 7 years old, health and happy. Quite often a naughty cat gets in fights with cats in the neighbourhood but frequently comes home with scratches in his thick, gray fur.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Neighborhood does help. Six years before, at the hottest day of the year, I saw man working on the grass at the bank next door. I didn’t know him, and I decided to do something kind. I went in the house, take a Cola from my fridge and returned outside. Then I stood at the place that he could see me. I held up the drink and pointed to her. He nodded. When he came to accept the bottle from me, he thanked me immediate. He said that he was thinking about get something to drink.
He has helped me a lot of since then. He gives me advices whenever I need help.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My friend Lilly and I were on the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if the boy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aid before, so we knew how we should do. We dialed "120" and called an ambulance. While waiting it, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boy onto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance arrived 5 minutes late.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day come together, there will be a long holiday. Therefore, as for me, I am not going to travel anywhere, because I don’t want to join in the crowds. Instead, I just wanted to stay in my home and enjoy the family hour. I am so happily that my grandparents will come to stay with us for a few days. So my parents decide to having a family barbecue and invite more relative to spend the holiday with us. It is such a great reunion that everyone will have good time. What’s more, we will drive to our hometown, what is near to the city. There will be fewer people or we can appreciate the beauty of nature.