增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
My dance school has a float in our town’s parade (游行) every year. I was so exciting when I got been selected to be part of the special dance. The rehearsals (排练) did conflict to a few of my soccer games. However, their teacher said it’d be okay as soon as I practised the steps at home. Well, I should have practised hardly! We were right in middle of the routine, and I turned right while the rest of the class went left. My mess-up caused a whole row of dancer to knock over. I heard the whole town went silent as they watched!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my mom went to the market and buys vegetables for 10 yuan. For any reason, my mom failed to pay by phone. What’s worse, she had no cashes on her. Fortunately, the seller was kind enough to let my mom to pay for them next time. The next day, my mom got to the market regardless of the heavy rain, and no one gathered there. After another day, my mom spent a long time look for the seller, and she finally found him. When my mom handed the money to him, he couldn’t be so grateful and praised her honesty. Mom said she just repaid his trust for her. From the thing, I’ve learned trust is two-way street and what it is trust between people that makes the world a better place.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday in a parking lot, there stopped the fruit truck. The seller walked from car to car, tried to sell his strawberry. My mother had bought a big box, that contained six small baskets of strawberries. We knew we could not eat them up before they went badly. So, I asked to give some to our neighbors this morning. I initially refused and I did eventually go to three of our neighbors. I knocked on their doors and gave every a basket. I told them that I was their neighbor and my family and I was spreading love to the neighborhood by giving away strawberries. They gratefully accepted.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was Sunday. I was doing housework while someone knocked at the door. It was a milkman who sent a bottle of milk. But I didn’t order them. Feeling confused, I noticed a note stick to it. The note says “Dear neighbor, I’m sorry about a noise made by our decoration that will last for three days. The bottle of milk is given to you as a gift show our apology.”
The next day, everyone in the neighborhood were talking about the milk and our coming neighbor. With the decoration being finished, the family finally moved into the neighborhood. People came to help. I was deep touched by this scene which was full on consideration and appreciation.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are lots of versions of mooncakes all over China. They have a variety of fillings among that I love the red bean filling better.
I remember try my first mooncake as a kid. We sat in my grandmother’s yard while the full moon shines brightly. It was very special moment. My grandmother baked mooncakes for the whole family. She turned flour and red bean into wonderful mooncakes like magic. When she placed them on the table, they looked like small, round and golden-brown. The deliciously smell soon reached my nose. When she took each bite, the sweet and mild taste slowly filled my mouth.
The mooncake is always my favourite because of its good taste and the happy memories it bring to my mind.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I was walking down the street when I spot an elderly man sitting alone in front of a tea house. I decided to do something unusually. I walked up to him and asked if I could join him, in which surprised him a lot. Late, we two sat there for the next two hour exchanging stories. The man shared some of his amazing life stories with us. When I left, he thanked me for give my time to a lonely elderly man. I then told him that I would happy to meet him for another conversation next Sunday. After I posted an incident on social media, I received many like.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning, when I look out of the window, I excitedly found it was snowing heavily. Attracting by the beautiful sight, I decided to go out to take some photo. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldn’t wait go outside with my camera. As I walked on the path in front of our building, I saw the boy suddenly slip on the snow-covered ground. It was at that moment when I realized what I should do. Immediate, I ran back home to get a broom and started to sweep the path. I worked so hard that I sweated a lot of. An hour late, the thick snow was cleared away. Looking at the clean path, my neighbors all smiled but gave me thumbs up. I felt happy that I did something for my neighborhood.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Some of my classmates kept tell me they went to the city library to do their homeworks. Last weekend, I decided to give them a try. Having been told all the desks would be occupied in the flash, I went there early, quickly choose a desk and settled down. I finished all the work much more earlier than the scheduled time. I was amazing by my efficiency and thought about the reasons. When in a library, you feel too embarrassed to check your phone frequent. And when you look up, what you always see is someone deeply engaged in they are reading or doing. That acts like a stimulus, encouraging or forcing you to focusing on your work.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keep a dog as my pet and companion. My parents disagreed, saying that I was too young that I couldn’t take care of me, let alone a dog. I didn’t give up. Instead, I tried to be independence and often helped with housework. A few month later, my parents found that I had become more considerate than before. They finally approve of my request. On my eighth birthday, they bought me lovely dog as a gift. Followed my parents’ directions, I’ve learned how to raise the dog. I still miss those old days that we accompanied with each other.
