1 . 假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nancy, aged 65, is a special friend of me. I like chatting with her but she enjoys my company. We talk about everything and kept no secrets from each other. It’s nice of her give me so much wise advice, from that I have benefited a lot. Last Saturday I visited her as usually. When I knocked at the door, there was no answer. Looking through the window, I was shocking to see her lying on the floor. I called 120 at a once. Minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took her to the hospital. She thanked me for have saved her life. I was happy to have done that.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On a freezing snowy day, I have to eat out. As soon as I got outside, I felt cold wind blown snow into my face.
All of a sudden repeated short noises reached my ears in wind. Wondering where it came from, I followed the noises, taking care of each of my step in order not to slip. An old man with grey hair came into sight, but there were piles of snow on his two sides. He was clearing the road off snow in the biting cold. He was neither tall nor strong, but I felt nothing was taller as this old man.
He could have stayed in his warm home comfortable, tasting tea while watching a TV programme. What he did has not only shortened the hours we spent on the road but also narrowed the distance between people.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧) ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 .每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest hold in our school, that made me very excited. I used to be too shy not to speak English in public. It was Susan who asks me to practice several times in her office and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. Besides, she encouraged me be confident and brave whether I wanted to show my talent before others. I followed her advices. That was why I won the first prize. I am deep moved by what she have done for me. I owe her a thousand thanks for his kindness.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what’s worse, the bus runs out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out of the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for his help.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once there was a spider called Anansi. He wondered if how to be more intelligent. He went around the village to collecting wisdom with a basket. Soon his basket was full. He wanted to hide it on the top of a tree. Therefore, with the basket tying to the front part of his body, he found hard to climb the tree. Then his youngest son walked by, “Why not carry a basket on your back instead?” Following his advice, Anansi climbed the tree easily, but he wasn’t pleasing. “I have collected so many wisdom, but my baby son is still wise than me. Take back your wisdom!” He throw the basket of wisdom into the air. And that’s how wisdom went all over the world.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As my parents and I was on our way to pay for our parking space，a woman came up to them.She said she had just paid for hers but she had called back home just now and was curious about how we would like to have her parking pass.She refused to take up any money for it and insisted that we took it.We gladly accepted it and thanked her.We got down to the beach in time to watch the sun setting because of this woman’s kind and we were so thankfully.It was a wonderful experience and a sunset was so delighted a sight!
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three week. The job was hard and bored, and it seemed endless, what made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. And I stuck to it with great determination .Every day I start off for work early in the morning and got to home late in the evening Finally, I finished the job before the new term began.
Now, I understand what labor means. I think it is great experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Our school encouraged is to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I’ve learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday on my way home, I saw the little boy playing just beside a construction site with iron sheets blocked it as a fence. I went over to warn him the potential danger. He smiled shy at me and walked away. Just at that moment, the fence falls down right there on the same spot which the kid was playing. I was shocked and hurried to see that he was hurt or something. But I saw him running away. He somehow panicked either. Miracles happen every day. We should always be sensitive and not let the noise of the world to deafen us and fail to notice small and amazing wonders of our planet.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：吧多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The train left lately that night and arrived in Montreal at dawn the next morning. At the station, people everywhere was speaking French. There were signs and ads in the French, but some of them had English words in smaller letter. “We don’t leave until this evening,” said Liu Qian. “Let’s going downtown. Old Montreal is close the water.” They spend the afternoon in lovely shops but visiting artists in their workplaces beside the water. As they sat in a buffet restaurant looked over the broad St Lawrence River, a young man sat down with us.
