增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On our way home yesterday, one of my close friends was feeling a bit low because of she had a really bad day. I tried many way to cheer her up, but anything worked. I was worried on her. Whenever we were nearly home, I found that the trees along the road was in beautiful fall colors and the sun was shining. So I point it out to her. See that, she started to get happy and enjoy the colors. She took pictures of the yellow leaves and was all smiles final. This was a good lesson showing that nature is always there comfort and encourage us.