注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I wanted very much to see a film together with my brother after supper. On my way to the cinema, we happen to meet an American named Peter, who had lost his way, looked worried. When he told us what he wasn't able to find the hotel, we decided take him there. When we went to the hotel, we told of Peter the great changes that had taken place in our country in the past few year, and he told us a lot of things about the youths in the U.S.A. Although my brother and I missed a interesting film, we felt very happily, for we had not only helped Peter out of trouble and also learnt something from him.
As the saying goes, “Friendship is like sunshine what keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to making good friends so that we can always have a fun. I like to choose people who are kind, honesty and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears them whenever I get into trouble.
Now I have some good friends who trusts me. I always care about what had happened to them, because I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and play. I try to offer some advices to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to keep friendship.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have two foreign friend, Kari and Vance, who come from the USA. Now they are teaching English in same university in Shijiazhuang. Last year they paid a visit to our school. I have never met foreigners ago and wanted very much to know what I was getting along with my spoken English. So I went over to talk with him. Both of them were surprising that a school student could speak English so good. They advised to taking a photo together. Since then we had been good friends or now we often write English letters to each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago,I was chosen by my classmate to take part an English speech competition.When go up to the stage,I felt nervous.At the once,my mother's words came to me,"If you want to succeed,it costs nothing and self-confidence."Since I had the chance to standing here,it meant that I had the ability.I said to myself,"Have you forgotten that you have prepared for this competition for a longer time?You are the best."Strange,my nervousness disappeared.I spoke very fluently that all the audience cheers after my speech.I was successful!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went to London for a visit two weeks before. While walked in Hyde Park one morning, I find an ID card of a Frenchman on the ground. There was nobody around, so I figured that it was best to pick them up. The moment I got back to my hotel, I searched for the owners online, and found a Facebook account that exact matched his picture. It was happened that his phone number was in the account, but I sent him a message with a photo of the ID card. He wrote back to me with no time. And next day he picked up the ID card from the hotel’s front desk.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I was asked to send my grandmother to the school bus stop, because she is not able to walk through the snow with his walker. There was a mom walked with her little son in the same direction. The boy was screaming and crying all way. Before my grandmother left by bus, I walked back with the mom and she told me that the boy could make up sounds but no words at this point. I held up my hand to the boy, which was walking, and he took it. He was content with my hands while I chatted with his mom. I felt he trusted me. It made me very happily, too.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A year ago, the factory where my brother worked closed down because of poorly management. He became one of those people who was out of work overnight. He didn’t complain like others. However, he thought of it as a good chance. To equip himself with a bright future, he attended evening class to learn more knowledge. And at the same time, he opened online bookstore. Owing to her good service, the bookshop was very popular. His hard work had finally paid off. Talk of his success, he smiled and said, “God help those who help themselves.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear John,
How time flies! I’m very glad to hear you again. You want to know which is going on in schools in China. In the word, everything has changed. Every school take part in the campaign of reducing learning load. In the past, I used to studying until 11: 30 on weekends. But now I can arrange things of my own, such as readme books, visiting museums, or take computer lessons on weekends. In the evening I can watch news on the TV, or read newspapers. What’s more, my parents support me. They think because I am a student, I don’t have to study all day long. I think the idea of reducing learning load was well accepted by everyone.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to Sunshine Nursing home, where they visited for the first time. On their arrive, they were warm welcomed by the elderly. Respectfully, they presented the elderly fruits and flowers. Then they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Before everything was done, they sat in the yard, chat with the elderly. When it was time for all of them to leave, the elderly thanked for them, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. They said it was a meaning day which they would remember it forever. What they do has brought other people joy and enriched their own lives.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.每句只有一处错。
Nowadays, a lot of people are unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted different. Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back school, Liu Fang came across an old man lie on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, calling 120 and gave first aid. Soon, the ambulance came and took the man to hospital. When anything was OK, she left for school. Such is Liu Fang, the helpful person. Thought there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we help others, but yet I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in needs. Also, if you don’t offer your help when others are in trouble, what can you expect help from others when you were in trouble?
