增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, Liu Wei, a middle school student, helped an injure woman. In November 12,Liu Wei was on way to school. Suddenly he saw a woman fall off her bicycle. Because the woman's leg was hurt badly, so when she tried to get to her foot, she failed. On see this, Liu Wei came to help her. He took out the piece of clean cloth and then tie it to the wound carefully. Finally, he took the woman to the nearest hospital. It was at that time when he realized it was too lately for the competition -he had missed it!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Bob, I’m writing to apologize for having forgotten to return The Beatles CD to you when I left Canada. I was in such hurry that I packed everything in my luggages without checking carefully. If I have paid more attention then, I wouldn't have made such stupid a mistake. Now everything must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormous. I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you in a reasonable price. If you do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time when I go to Canada. Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. Felt extremely guilty, I really hope you will accept my sincerely apology.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When my new neighbor moves in, I did not want to meet her as I was shy. But she seemed so nice that I hoped one day I would be able meet her.
One day, my neighbour invited me to her house. I started to hesitate though I felt kind of happily. Then I reminded myself of that t his would be a good chance to meet her. But I went there and had the great time with her. That week, I made a few cakes and gave it to her. She thanked me very sincere. A week later I decided to send her some cookie. This time I didn’t run away but stood there smile at her instead.
Being responsible is actual not that difficult. I used to think it was hard to growing up into a responsible member of society. An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car,which drove off quickly. A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation. Soon many help was given to the girl. Because we sent her to the nearest hospitals in time, she was able to receive proper treatment. Not badly injured, he expressed gratitude to those giving help. Comparing with the escaped driver, I was proud of what I did.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This afternoon, I went home by bus as usual. I was listening music when I suddenly noticed the bus stop that I should get off. Then I hurried off a bus. But when I arrived home, I find that my wallet was gone--some money and several important card were in it. Eager to get the wallet back, so I rushed to the bus company for help. Lucky, at the Lost and Found office, I saw my wallet. I felt so delighting that I wanted to thank the person who had turned them in. However, I was told the man hadn’t left his name. I can’t imagine how a great man he is!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It happened in last weekend. Jenny pulled over onto the sides of a New Mexico road and was suffered a panic attack when a minivan full of kids pulled over. A women got out and asked if she was OK. “No,” she said. Then she told her what has happened: she was delivering books for a publishing company. Their next stop was way, way up that long, winding and, to her, very dangerously road. She didn’t think she could do that. “I’ll deliver the books for you,” the woman said. She was a local, and the roads were something for her. Jenny accepted offer and never forgot the simple kind of the stranger.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计
In Sunday evening I was in a local pizza takeout when couple of teenagers came in. They each ordered a small pizza for them and then they ordered another four large pizzas to be delivered to the nearest police station, where was having a training night. They asked for the delivery person to include a note writing by themselves. In the note they thanked the member of the police station for all they did for the community and for helping their friend when he is in a serious accident. They explained far that he wouldn’t be alive but for their great efforts. I don’t know these kids, but I am very pride of them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I am writing to ask you to help to look for the Chinese student.
Yesterday, my roommate Tony was on the way to the classroom when he fall down and could hardly move. Just at that moment, when a Chinese girl came to him. She gave him first aid (急救) but called an ambulance. Because the kind girl, Tony was sent to hospital in time. But the girl left quietly after Tony could express his thanks. The girl is about eighteenth years old and middle-sized. Tony real wants to meet her to express her sincere appreciation. Could you please help to find her?
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn’t even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. “We don’t employ dishonest people in Germany” is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. He had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have two foreign friend, Kari and Vance, who come from the USA. Now they are teaching English in same university in Shijiazhuang. Last year they paid a visit to our school. I have never met foreigners ago and wanted very much to know what I was getting along with my spoken English. So I went over to talk with him. Both of them were surprising that a school student could speak English so good. They advised to taking a photo together. Since then we had been good friends or now we often write English letters to each other.