增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our class organized a cooking show to improve students living skills. We were told to learn to cook a dish or share the experience with classmates. That evening when I turned to Mom for help. She suggested making steamed fish since it was easy for her to cook. Under Mom’s carefully guidance, I succeeded. My father recorded whole process at the same time. My parent praised me for the wonderful color and smell of the dish. Seeing them enjoy it, I feel overjoyed. The next day, I shared my cooking experience with the class meeting, as well as the happiness gaining from cooking for families.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Knowing you’re interested in Chinese food, what glad I am! At your request, I’d like to recommend tomato and egg noodles since you are the new learner. Firstly, this is a traditional Chinese dish preparing easily. Also, it takes less time and popular with people who are very busy to cook a big meal. Most importantly, you can learn about its name that it mainly needs three kind of materials—noodles, tomatoes and eggs. Both of them are easy to come by in our daily life. You can find out detailed cooking steps on the blog I post the other day. Hope you can make it!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a little girl, I was teaching the basics of cooking by my mom. Looking back now, and I realize that those passing moments have became my treasure. While I am far from being a professional chef, she love spending my spare time learn to cook something new. On the one hand, it is challenging for my brain, what is of benefit to me. On other hand, at the end of the cooking process, I usually had delicious food to share with my family and sometimes friends. Seeing the clean plates and satisfied smiles are really nice because I like making people happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom is a best cook in our neighbourhood. All my friend love to have supper at my house because of they love my mom’s cooking. I especially love my mom’s dumplings, what have various kinds of fillings, and all of them are deliciously. When we have a neighbourhood gathering everyone insisted that my mom should do all the cooking.Though sometimes tiring, she is willing to cooking things for others. Seeing people enjoy what she cooks are her happiest time. I’ve decided to be good a cook as my mom so I’m learning how to cook now.
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way,” my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love my parents and often cook them in my spare time. I make dumplings most frequent because of three reason. First of all, dumplings are delicious and health. Secondly, I can put nearly all kinds of things into dumplings as fillings, what include different meats and vegetables. Finally, to the some degree, making dumplings are a form of art. There aren’t any set rules so it’s pleasant to trying different folding techniques to make my dumplings special. No matter what shape we make, I always make sure the dumpling is well sealing and this is absolutely the most important rule.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, but then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engine were outside my house. I was quite worry. I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking that it caused the heavy smoke.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove,I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together."Not that way,"my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I really wanted to cook when I was four. My dad, however, thinks I was too young to learn cooking. For many years, he only allowed me observe him cook. All I did was watch him in the kitchen. Sometimes, he would not let me give a hand. I really enjoyed stay in the kitchen. Besides, there were also not good kitchen moment. There was a time when the fire became really bigger and I was scared by them greatly. It took about a year of me to overcome my fear of fire. One day, my dad permitted me to start cooking on my own final. You couldn't imagine how happy I was.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday my mother let me to help her make chocolate cookies. First we measure ingredients(配料). As soon as the butter was soft, we put them into a large bowl and mixed it with sugar. Next, she asked me to add eggs into the butter or sugar. Then it was time to adding flour. You must be careful that you don't add too many flour at one time or you'll cover everything in a white dust. Final, we added chocolate and some nuts. The mixture put on a cookie sheet with a spoon and twenty minute later, our delicious creations were ready. After taste some, I found that cookies taste the best when they are still warm.