1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today, the once-in-500-years total solar eclipse (日食) took place. Unfortunate, I was ill and couldn’t observe it myself, so I had to watch it on television. I clearly watched the Diamond Ring, Bailey’s Beads (贝利珠) or solar eclipses in other areas. The sun on TV was originally round, what later became a boat, like a dog taking off a big bite of a biscuit. Gradually, the sun became thin than an eyebrow. Suddenly, Bailey’s Beads and the Diamond Ring jump out naughtily. Then, a large black disk obviously hung in the sky, the sky became as black as night. After the while, the sun slowly recovered. Ah ha, the dog couldn’t swallow the biscuit and spat out.