注意:1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake when suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water while many people were standing by without doing anything. With any hesitation（犹豫）, I had pushed through the crowd but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carry him back to safety. Lucky, the kid saved. I was proud of that I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in the need.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Monday morning, I was on my way to school when suddenly as I saw a boy knocked down by the car. In a hurry, I ran over and found the boy was serious hurt with much blood on his face. Immediately, I call an ambulance and the boy was taking to the nearest hospital. To my relief, the boy was fine and would recover in a few day. I went away without giving his name. I was late for class, and I felt happy for what I had done. As a proverb says, “Help others is the source of happiness.” I feel it our duty make the world a better place to live in.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，井在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One evening my brother and I was ready to see a film at Sangan Cinema along the main highway of Chennai. As we were afraid of being late the film, we walked faster than usual along the noise road. Suddenly, there was the loud cry, I saw a man roll on the ground. The man was knocking down by a car. The car driver was driving at a normal speed while he noticed a lorry coming from the opposite direction. The lorry was being driven very much fast. He tried to turn her car aside, but the car was out of control. It ran into the men and hit the pavement.
