增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a time when I was addicted to online games. Because of that, my study was suffered a lot. Instead for scolding me, Mother gave me a book written by Helen Keller and asked me to read it. Hardly have I finished a few pages when I was great attracted by Helen Keller. Despite her disability, she didn’t abandon hope and achieve a lot. This was her determination and courage that made her huge success.
When I finished reading the book, Mother had a talk with me. “You can also accomplish which Helen Keller did.” Mother’s words ring in my ear whenever I see the book, inspired me to face challenges in life.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Moments section of WeChat has become the popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about your life on it with our friend. Many teenagers, however, chose to keep their parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, and they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happily when my parents comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What’s more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, while inviting them in would helping us communicate better and feel closer to each other than before.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandmother is 89 years old. She had never used a mobile phone until she received it for her birthday this year. Since then, she has addicted to the Internet, used different kinds of software applications on her mobile device. She spends a plenty of time each day exploring websites and chatting with other people online. Instead of going to supermarket, nowadays she just presses a button and then her orders are delivered the next day. At first, my father has some doubt whether she was spending too much time in the virtual world, and now he sees how happy she is. She even downloads some materials what can help my father with his work, so now he’s very happy, too! We are all proud with her as she has proven that it’s never very late to learn a new skill.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, my parents encouraged me help my grandparents harvest rice. Honest, I had never done it before. But guessing it might to be fun, I agreed. I went to cut down rice in one of his grandparents’ rice fields. In the beginning, I were excited, but soon I found the job tired. Besides, my arms were covered in small painful cuts caused by the rice’s leaves. However, I didn’t give up. Together, we spent four days gather the crops, during which we chatted but laughed joyfully. An experience left a deep impression on me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I visited my aunt in a countryside near the city last week. I was surprising to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside. Take my aunt’s family for example. They supply rarely trees and flowers to the stores in the cities. And they have over ten worker working for them. Their family’s income reached as many as 100, 000 yuan last year. Not only do they have a house, a car and a computer, they can also afford an trip abroad every year. When they are asked what else they need most, they say that they want learn a little English. Only then can we do business with foreigners directly. To their delight, my cousin can used what he has learned from university to helping them with overseas trade now.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
On a bright November day, a graceful English lady walk into a cozy bookshop in the heart of London’s Chinatown. She picked up a orderly pile of New Year cards and calendars decorating with beautiful Chinese paper cutting patterns and Chinese ink paintings. Then she warm greeted the shop assistant. The lady was 91-year-old Pamela Youde whose husband was the late Sir Edward Youde, which served as the governor of Hong Kong between 1982 and in 1986. For several decade, Youde has been a loyal customer of Guanghwa Bookshop. Every winter, apart from buy New Year cards from Guanghwa for her friends and family, he also buys Chinese calendars for each of her four grandchildren. She expects help them learn Mandarin well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my mom went to the market and buys vegetables for 10 yuan. For any reason, my mom failed to pay by phone. What’s worse, she had no cashes on her. Fortunately, the seller was kind enough to let my mom to pay for them next time. The next day, my mom got to the market regardless of the heavy rain, and no one gathered there. After another day, my mom spent a long time look for the seller, and she finally found him. When my mom handed the money to him, he couldn’t be so grateful and praised her honesty. Mom said she just repaid his trust for her. From the thing, I’ve learned trust is two-way street and what it is trust between people that makes the world a better place.