增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As planning, Li Ming and I were set out for the mountain area happily in the morning, carrying the necessities in the backpacks.
We struggled up a hill but saw a direction mark. Down a hill, following the direction, we came to a river. There were no boats. Lucky, we had learned how to swim in the training class. But we should protect his things in the backpacks from being wet. Fortunately, we found a piece of board, on that we put our backpacks, and swam pushing the board. After getting to the other banks, we kept walking to the north for about half an hour.
Finally, we arrived the campsite, where we set up the tent and made a fire. The two of us spend the night in the forest.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank you so much for your kind invite to the exhibition, “Ancient India”, what is now on at the local museum. I’d love join you.
I’d be particular happy to watch this exhibition because the brilliant Indian culture have always been mysterious and attractive to me. India is a old civilization just like China. It would be excited to see all the exhibits that have traveled such that a long way to China! With you as a companion, there is a good chance to have a better understanding of Indian people’s life. Let’s meet at the entrance to the museum at 9:30 am in Thursday, July 23.
Best wishes!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some of my classmates and I went hiking on yesterday. Early in the morning, we gathered at our school gate and then head for West Lake, where was 10 kilometers away. On arriving, we first visited some famous places of interests there, which left a deep impression on us. Then we went boating, enjoy the beautiful scenery of the lake. Final, we tasted some local special snacks. Before we knew it, it was time for us go home. Although the hike was very tired, we all had a good time. They not only got relaxed by admiring the beauty of nature and also had our horizons broadened.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our class went mountain-climbing last week. Leading by our teacher, thirty of us started out trip. It was a nice day and the air was fresh, what made the trip more pleasant. We were chatting and laughing as we left our destination. I fall behind twice on the way, but with the encouragement of my classmates, I finally caught up with us and reached the top. Although we felt tiring, we thought it was meaningful. The experience brought us close to the nature and made us free from heavy schoolworks for a while. Additional, it increased the friendship among us. Seen our positive changes, our head teacher was also satisfied.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday was our family cleaning days. When I was sorting out my closet, I found a lot of clothes which looked newly, but in fact I hadn’t worn them for a long time. I was about to throw them away while my mother stopped me, say that there was an old clothes recycling center in our community. I told that some of the recycled clothes would be donated by people in need after being sorted. I eventually realize it was a great opportunity to protect the environment and helping people. At the last, I found the recycling center and recommended them to my friends.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday was our family cleaning days. While sorting out my closet, I found a lot of clothes wore by me when I was a child, which looked quite newly. I was about to throw them away while my mother stopped me, say that there was an old-clothes-recycling center in our community. I told that some of the recycled clothes would be donated by people in need. I eventually realize it was a great opportunity to protect the environment and help people. At the last, I found the recycling center. Later, I recommended them to my friends.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was young, I didn’t know much about the harmful effect of smoking. I didn’t know was more difficult for smoking couples to become pregnant or that their babies may have a lighter birth weight. Nor do I know that my cigarette smoke could have an influence in the health of non-smokers. However, that I did know was that my girlfriend thought I smelt terribly. I also noticed that I became breathless quickly, or that I wasn’t enjoying sport as much as before. When I was taken off from the school football team, she knew it was time to quit smoke.