【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；              2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing in the front of a store window. The little child had no shoes and his clothes are just rags. A young woman passed by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warm clothings. They walked back into the street, so the woman told the child to go home and has a happy holiday. The little boy looked grateful at her and asked why she did all this to him. She smiled and replied what she was just returning a favor she received as a child.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11 处起) 不计分。

My best friend had a seriously car accident last week. Although she has some major bones broken, but she is alive. The other three passenger, one being her 11-year-old sister, all managed to escape unharmed.

Many friends are offered support now. Some are cooking for her. Others have been taking care her sister, or picking up supplies she need. When I visited herself yesterday, we locked eyes. We both cried as she told me everything it had happened after the accident. It was the great release for both of us. We were both moved by what her friends have done for her.

【推荐3】短文改错

On a sunny day last month, I was visiting Summer Palace when I came across a little girl standing alone with tear streaming down her face. I walked up to her and offered to help. Thankful, she calmed down and told me what had been happened. She came here to do some sightseeing with her parents and they got separated. Immediately I take her to the broadcasting station. Before hearing the news, her parents rushed here. The girl couldn’t wail to run towards him. The couple thanked me warmly expressing their thanks for my kind help. Seen the family disappear into the distant, I felt very happy.

【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Something interested, happened to my parents and me. I stayed up late on Saturday’s night, so the next morning I didn’t woke up until my father called me to get up and play the piano. With my eyes closing, I begged to sleep more. My father had no choices but to leave my bedroom. Soon, my mother came in but asked me to get up to play football. I immediate jumped out of my bed, dressed up myself and ran away with my football. I didn’t know what my father would feel when he returned my bedroom and found I had left.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My mother has been living in the countryside when she was a child. Nowadays, she works hardly to grow vegetables with my father but goes to the market to sell them. My mother has a hobby-singing. She has the sweet voice. She usually sings while sell vegetables in the market, what attracts many customers. Hearing her to sing, many people come to buy vegetables. My whole family supports her. And last month, my mother took part a TV singing contest and wins a prize. That has made more people know her. Now my mother is a famous farmer's singer in our neighborhood.

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As everyone knows, parents are concerned about their kids, so do my parents. They often get nervous when I’m about take an important test, which in turns adds to my anxiety. Now I have decided to discuss over the problem with them. I’ll tell them I have set a goal for myself and I will try to achieve them. When my parents are convincing I’ll be responsible for that I should do, they surely won’t feel worried any more. If you face the same problem, why not talking to your parents face on face? It will be a easy way to get on well with your parents.