增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It fills my heart with two feelings until I pick up my pen to write to you. One is the great joy of having landed a foreign country for post-graduation. The other, obviously, is the sadness of be away from you all.
I actually felt tired after having travelled by air for such many hours. Then getting settling also exhausted me. Although the college and the lecturers are the second to none in perfectness, at several moments I felt like bursting into tear. I felt extreme homesick. Finally, that has not been overcome totally, so far. Yes, one had to be strong, in the end.
There is a number of things to share but I will stop myself here.
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10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分
Several days before, I was out with my friends at a local fast food restaurant. The food we ate was good but we had fun together. Before we left for the restaurant, we found that it also sold ice cream. We got exciting because we hadn’t eaten ice cream for a long time. One of my friend decided to buy all of us ice cream and in the restaurant, they all screamed (尖叫) with joy! Then the man came in with his son, who wanted to buy ice cream either. In the end, he decides to pay for our ice cream. We moved by such an act of kindness on a hot day.
Dear Bob，
Thank you for your last letter asked about our library.
Let me make a brief introduction with our library. It is locating in front of our teaching building, facing the garden on the other side. And a variety of trees are planted around it. The wonderful circumstances make that a splendid place to study.
Our library has a great deal of books, covering all fields of science, literature, art or so on. But you can easily pick up that you need, since they are clearly classified in order.
The library is open from Monday to Friday, from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm, and closed at weekends. You can borrow five books at one time and should return it in ten days. Or you can just read inside the library as enough tables and chairs were provided.
Yours，
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thanks for your letter. I’m glad to know that you are getting along well on your classmates.
Well, I agree that it’s difficulty to choose our future occupations as there are lots of different jobs. However, I would like not follow in my parents’ footsteps because I’m not interested in his professions. I’ve asked my father for advices. He suggested I chose my career according to my preferences.
As for me, I enjoy travel around and I want to see the world. Perhaps I’d rather work as a guide in tourism. Therefore, I haven’t made the final choice yet. I like playing the football too.
Some people turn their hobbies into their careers. Have you any hobbies? Drop myself a line when you can.
