增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood experience, I think that three reason might explain the fear. The first reason is why I was not allowed to go near the water. When I was a child, my mother had unreasonable fear of it. So, as a child I was taught see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my glasses in the water, I couldn't see anything, but this increased my fear. The worst part of your experience is that as a child I see a neighbor drown. Since then I have been more frightened.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删减:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a Sunday afternoon. My parents and I were watching TV excited when suddenly I spotted the pigeon on the balcony. It was a white pigeon with a ring around one of its foot. It rested there quietly, refuse to fly away. Realizing it must have been lost its way back home, I managed call the Pigeon Association up for help. In the same time, my parents brought the pigeon inside and gave it some bird food, what helped refresh it. Before long, the owner got the message but came to take the pigeon back. He thanked us a lot. My parents and I both felt happy for what we had done.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was walking home from school while suddenly it rained heavy. What should I do? I didn’t have an umbrella and a raincoat with me. I looked around and saw some student walking happily under their umbrellas. They must listened to the weather forecast. I began to run and was caught in the rain. I kept run until I got to a bookstore which I could wait until the rain stopped and in the same time I could read my favorite books. After about half a hour, the rain stopped and I go home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandparents live in a small mountain village, in that there are many trees grew well, including several walnut trees. Every year my grandparents gave me walnuts and last year Grandpa told me with a sadly look on his face that he had no walnuts. I asked why. He said the squirrels lad eaten both the walnuts. I was very surprised, because we had never had squirrels there ago. Grandpa sad probably the squirrels had brought from the south. He said he wouldn’t let them get away with then bad deeds. I try to persuade Grandpa not to hurt the lovely squirrels, promising I would rather not to eat walnuts. Grandpa agreed to his request.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last night, my friend planned to go to KTV together, so they asked me if I wanted to go with them. I liked KTV very much, and I always practice singing when I am taking shower. However, I had a math class to attending. At last, I decided to cut the class and go with them. When I was singing songs with my friends, and I was thinking about my math teacher. What would she do if she found out I had cut his class? Would she be disappointing in me and even punished me? I couldn’t have fun for all my heart. It was the first time for me to cut a class, and I felt so badly. I will never cut a class again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.
However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by.
Remember: only you can make himself happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I once paid a brief visit China ten years ago and it was my dream to return someday. Travel the length of the country felt like a dream then. However, in 2017 it finally came truly. Not for a few weeks’ adventure, and to live and work for a year. It was an unique opportunity to experience many about the mysterious country. I would communicate with people from different backgrounds and have lots of funs. I was warmly welcomed the moment when I arrived at the college. I thought, “I am going to enjoy this.” It really go like this. Indeed, my students often ask, “Bruce, why are we always smiling?” What else could 1 say?