As a student, part of the process of becoming a better writer is learning to revise (修改) one’s written work.
Secondly, you need to tell your child that the writing process is made up of several steps.
Overall, revision is about making writing stronger.
A.Adding or deleting words isn’t revising. |
B.Revision is different from proofreading or editing. |
C.Therefore, make sure to show your child how to revise. |
D.Is there information in the essay that is not related to the topic? |
E.Is the argument in the essay strong enough to make readers convinced? |
F.As a parent, you should impress on your child the challenge of revising the essay. |
G.Beginners are taught that writing involves developing an idea and putting it on paper. |
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【推荐1】How to Understand the Mind of an Interviewer
Getting inside an interviewer’s head can be tricky, as their perspective will change according to personality type, professional role, and personal experience.
Research the company to determine what the interviewer is looking for. Company culture (work-life balance, atmosphere, etc.) is a great indicator of what your interviewer will want to see in candidates.
Look up the interviewer when possible.
Identify how the interviewer’s position will influence expectations. The role of your interviewer usually has an impact on what that person expects from a candidate. An HR representative, for example, will want to know you’re a good fit with the company culture and values. A direct manager, however, would be most interested in your practical ability to do the job.
Regardless of their roles, most interviewers will want to know you’ll make their lives easier.
A.Be consistent with what you wrote in your resume. |
B.Expect the interviewer to question you on your resume. |
C.Therefore, it’s not an easy job to understand their mind. |
D.So try to make a point of addressing this during the interview. |
E.Usually, you’ll be informed of your interviewer’s name before you meet them. |
F.However, you can research on the interviewer and tailor your answers to stand out. |
G.In most situations, interviewers will expect you to share similar values with the company. |
【推荐2】Grade 3 high school students are graduating next summer. Many of them will go to university. The transition from high school to college is challenging.
Your opinions and outlook on college matter.
Don’t be afraid to talk to your professors or teaching assistants.
Be confident. Feeling anxiety about communicating with peers, professors and speaking up in class may be a problem for you.
A.Hold onto high school friendships. |
B.Be open to making new friends on campus. |
C.And successful adjustment to college has lifelong effects. |
D.Successful adjustment is about reaching out for help when you need it. |
E.Family support can give you comfort and assistance when classes get hard. |
F.One of the best ways to increase your communication confidence is to practice. |
G.So try to face the uncertainty that goes along with going to college with enthusiasm. |
【推荐3】Having a pet is rewarding, but it can be hard work as well. However, if you are well prepared, caring for a pet doesn’t have to be a tiring job.
Choose a pet that fits your lifestyle. Different types of dogs have different needs.
Plan regular visits to the vet(兽医). Be sure to bring your pet to the vet soon after buying it. Just like humans, pets need regular check-ups.
Exercise your pet if it’s the kind of pet that needs it. Find out the exercise needs of the pet before you buy it. Besides, you should also consider whether your lifestyle gives you enough time to meet your pet. Some pets don’t require you to take them for a walk, such as the rabbit and fish.
A.It is important to exercise your pet. |
B.Are you considering keeping a pet? |
C.But other pets like dogs must be exercised. |
D.Determine if you are really able to care for a pet. |
E.Are you sure you are buying proper food for your pet? |
F.Therefore, make sure you pick a pet that suits your lifestyle. |
G.This helps to find problems before their condition becomes serious. |
【推荐1】Being an early bird, or the opposite night owl (夜猫子), is usually not something that is thought of as being highly under our control. Some people seem to sleep early while others get a second wind and tend to sleep late. This internal clock is a person’s unique internal timekeeper and the body’s own master controller of many functions. Most obvious is our sleep patterns; however, it also plays a role in our eating patterns, hormone levels, and maybe even our mood.
A recent study looked at whether the body clock is related to levels of physical activity. Using a watch-like device that measures movement, over 5,000 participants’ activity levels were collected for two weeks. After considering some factors that may explain differences, such as education or background health conditions, they found that night owls, as compared to morning types, had up to 60 to 90 fewer minutes per day of activity.
For those with a more of an “eveningness” type, jobs or other demands on time may mean that a morning alarm is sounding well before their natural wake time. As a result, a night owl type may be starting the day relatively “jet lagged” (有时差感的) —feeling out of step with their body due to being awake when the body would prefer to be asleep.
We should emphasize that this study does not tell us that being a night owl is the cause of lower physical activity. It only shows a connection between being an early bird or night owl and certain conditions. In this study, we only considered two factors —sleep patterns and activity. Using your eat-sleep cycle to your advantage as much as possible to be active is probably the best advice. Are you someone who feels ready and clear first thing in the morning? That may be the best time to get those steps in. More energy in the evening? Then scheduling that walk for after dinner may be best.
1. What do we know about the internal clock?A.It motivates people to sleep early. | B.It keeps a person careful about time. |
C.It affects multiple functions of the body. | D.It masters the patterns of mood and eating. |
A.An early bird received higher education. | B.A night owl had lower physical movement. |
C.An early bird had more reasonable activity levels. | D.A night owl had better background health conditions. |
A.Uneasy. | B.Natural. | C.Energetic. | D.Embarrassed. |
A.Do exercise after dinner. | B.Adjust our sleep patterns. |
C.Make a schedule in advance. | D.Make the most of our body clock. |
The next day, my husband and son were offered more credits to take an even later flight. Yes, I encouraged — okay, ordered — them to wait it out at the airport, to “earn” more Delta Dollars. Our total take: $1,600.Not bad, huh?
Now some people may think I’m a bad mother and not such a great wife either. But as a bigtime bargain hunter, I know the value of a dollar. And these days, a good deal is something few of us can afford to pass up.
I’ve made a living looking for the best deals and exposing(揭露)the worst tricks. I have been the consumer reporter of NBC’s Today show for over a decade. I have written a couple of books including one titled Tricks of the Trade: A Consumer Survival Guide. And I really do what I believe in.
I tell you this because there is no shame in getting your money’s worth. I’m also tightfisted when it comes to shoes, clothes for my children, and expensive restaurants. But I wouldn’t hesitate to spend on a good haircut. It keeps its shape longer, and it’s the first thing people notice. And I will also spend on a classic piece of furniture. Quality lasts.
1. Why did Delta give the author’s family credits?A.They took a later flight. |
B.They had early bookings. |
C.Their flight had been delayed. |
D.Their flight had been cancelled. |
A.She rarely misses a good deal. |
B.She seldom makes a compromise. |
C.She is very strict with her children. |
D.She is interested in cheap products. |
A.She’s a teacher. |
B.She’s a housewife. |
C.She’s a media person. |
D.She’s a businesswoman. |
A.How to expose bad tricks. |
B.How to reserve airline seats. |
C.How to spend money wisely. |
D.How to make a business deal. |
【推荐3】Having a negative attitude on life and yourself is harmful to you and to the people around you.
If you believe the world is a bad place, you will probably tend to have a negative attitude. As such, if you can work on changing your beliefs about the world, your attitude will likely follow suit. So try to look for evidence that is contrary to the belief that you hold.
Examine your ideas about the world.
Your negative ideas about the world may cause you to act a certain way and this can determine the result of some situations.
Take responsibility for your attitude.
You have a lot of control over the way you think about the world. Try to keep that in mind and use it to your advantage.
Re-frame your focus.
In some sense, much of reality is personal, such as whether you enjoy what you are doing or not. This largely depends on the thoughts that you emphasize and focus on. For example, if you do not much enjoy your job, you might think with a bad attitude “This really sucks”.
A.Fake it until you make it. |
B.Challenge your existing beliefs. |
C.Eventually, you are responsible for your attitude. |
D.Your negative ideas may even start with predictions . |
E.You can examine your attitude about the world and about yourself. |
F.However, you could also take a positive attitude and think “It is pretty amazing.” |
G.The longer you have a negative thought, the harder it may change that attitude. |