Today I'd like to tell you something that I experience in the City Park. In the afternoon of last Sunday, my friend and I were taking a walk along a river in the City Park, when suddenly we heard a boy call for help in the river. We jumped into the river or pulled the boy out. Then we made him to breathe using the mouth-to-mouth way. Before the boy came to himself, we sent her to hospital at once and telephoned his parents. The boy was saved. His parents were very thankful us and the doctors thought high of our first aid. We realized that knowing first aid is very help and important because it can help you to save lives.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We will graduate from senior high. Last week, we decided to make a video, which theme is “Thank our mother school” in honor of our school.
Firstly, we hold a discussion about the procedure as to what to make it, such as the design and contents of it. Then, we were divided into two groups. One group took some typical photos in and around the schoolyard, while the others interviewed our teachers. Finally, we asked someone having a talent for computers edit the video. With everything doing, we played the video during the graduation ceremony. In our great joy, the video turned up to be a huge success.
I’ll watch the video and look back on our old days every time when I think of our school. I’ll remember our mother school for better.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Tom is music lover. He knows beats (音乐节拍) quite good. Now, the teenager is used his talent to become a DJ—a person which mixes different music during shows. He often gives shows around his hometown. At shows, Tom had to deal with difficult people. Once, a couple invited him to be the DJ at our party. The husband wanted country music, so his wife asked for pop music. To make them all happy, Tom played music in both styles. After playing at different parties and shows, Tom has become more confident and better at meet people’s needs. Moreover, he has made of enough money to buy set of DJ equipment so he can practice at home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was punished once while I was at school. That was only because I forced to do something I didn't want to do it. I got punished because of the boy, who I was really frightened for. One day, he told me he will be sitting behind me. I was asked to move my paper so that he could read that I'd written. I did as he said, but we were all caught cheating. I had to write a composition about honest. Learning what had happened, my head teacher criticized me or encouraged me to be trustworthy. I can hard forget the experience.
