增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We will graduate from senior high. Last week, we decided to make a video, which theme is “Thank our mother school” in honor of our school.
Firstly, we hold a discussion about the procedure as to what to make it, such as the design and contents of it. Then, we were divided into two groups. One group took some typical photos in and around the schoolyard, while the others interviewed our teachers. Finally, we asked someone having a talent for computers edit the video. With everything doing, we played the video during the graduation ceremony. In our great joy, the video turned up to be a huge success.
I’ll watch the video and look back on our old days every time when I think of our school. I’ll remember our mother school for better.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When my dad and I were walking, we see some rubbish on the sidewalk. So we decided to do a clean-up. I took a picker but Dad held a big rubbish bag. Together we picked up the rubbish. It was surprised that the bag was filled so quickly. Then we were put the rubbish into the roadside trash can and repeated the process several time before heading for our home. We felt satisfied that we did what we could for your Mother Earth. My father and I made of our minds to do this regular from then on. There is high time that we tried our best protect the environment.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday's morning, I, as well some of my classmates, rode shared bikes to the Xinhua Bookstore to buy some books. Enjoying the convenience brought by the shared bikes, everyone was happily all the way. Therefore, when we arrived at the bookstore, a scene of disorder at the gate of the bookstore attracted our attentions. The shared bikes were parking here and there, block the way of passers-by. One of my classmates suggested placing them in an order, so we start to work immediately. We worked for ten minutes and it was finally done. Seeing the tidily arranged bikes, we both felt delighted and proud.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend John and I went to a park last Saturday. The moment when we got there, we were great attracted by the beautiful scenery. We couldn't help taking photo to record the wonderful moments. As we walked on, we noticed the boy on his bike in front of us suddenly fall to the ground. The boy struggled to his feet, and failed. John and I ran to offer our help him immediately. John helped him stand carefully while I picked up our bike. Noticing that the boy wasn't hurt, I gave the bike back to him and reminded him to be careful while ride. He was very pleasing and thanked us for what we did.
