增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, I, together with my parents, were invited to my uncle's home in Beijing. My uncle, whose moved to Beijing when I was five, has been living there for nearly ten years. He meets us at the airport. The moment I arrived Beijing, I was so exciting. In the following days, we visited some places of interest and took photos in the front of TianAnMen Square. We both enjoyed visiting the Forbidden City because it deep impressed us. For me, this is one of the most rewarding trip I have ever made in my life and am looking forward to go there again.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I like travelling and my dream of visit Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during National Day this year. In October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, which we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extremely exciting. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I stayed at Bai Shan Hotel for a week when we visit Yanji last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in comfortable double-room with a big bath. That I liked best was the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email message every day. I also shared for
my friends many photos taking in Yanji. The food was wonderfully with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dishes.
It is such a great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Yanji.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ve received your email and know you are to pay four-day visit to China. I’m glad to travel with you as your guide.
We can stayed in Beijing for two days while in another destination for just one day. On the first day, we will visit some places of interests in Beijing, explore the culture of this city. The next day, we were going to make a tour of the Great Wall. In the third day, we’ll take the high-speed rail to Shanghai. Hainan is our last destination, which we can spend hours sunbathing on the beach. Finally, we’ll get parted and return to home separate.
Are you satisfying with these arrangements?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
My family took an amazed up to the northwest last summer.At the first, we flew to Lanzhou but then visited the famous Iron Bridge there.We also tasted Lanzhou beef noodles, which was the most delicious noodles I had ever had.Two days late, we went to the Mogao caves on the Silk Road.That impressed me most was the fantastic wall paintings.Finally, we reach our final destination, the Qinghai Lake, surrounded by mountains.The scenery was unbelievable beautiful.We found volunteers collecting rubbishes along the bank and we joined them too.Only then I realize we could make a difference to our environment.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After flying more than 12 hours, we finally arrived at London Heathrow Airport. I always dream about going to the UK, short of the United Kingdom, because it is the homeland of the language of English. I love English, but I love this country. Our first destination was London, where is the capital of both England and the UK. We pay a visit to many places of interests, for example, Westminster Abbey, Buckingham Palace, Tower of London, and so on. We saw the famous buildings in person which we could just see on books or on TV. You simply can’t imagine how exciting we were. At the dusk, we walked along River Thames like some Londoners did. Everything was perfect. If my parents hadn’t taken me to London, I wouldn’t had great fun there.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tom has been in my school as exchange student for near one month. He asked me to help him prepare her trip to the Great Wall on last Friday. Together with him, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beijing and some hotel informations. I also showed him how to use an app for useful messages, where would make his trip easy. In the afternoon, we went to a nearby shop to buy some masks or food. On Saturday morning, I go to the station to see him off. Waved goodbye to him at the station, I felt happily for him and wished him to have a safe journey and enjoy the beautiful scenery and Chinese culture.