【推荐1】短文改错
Dear Sir,

I’ve read your advertisements for a teaching assistant for a children’s winter camp. I’m very interested in this position but I think my personality and working experience will make him fit for the job. To begin, I have gained much experience of work with children from my part-time job as a babysitter. Besides, I had been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and classmates. More importantly, I can speak English fluently, that will help me work with native English teachers. I can work on the every evening after this term. I would real appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity so that I can gain much working experience.

Yours

Li Hua

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Andy,

I just wanted to write you a note of encouragement because I know you feel completely frustrate at not getting an award tonight.

Most of the time, you don’t necessary succeed in everything without difficulty for the first time you try it. For example, you may have to do a math problem a few times after you get it right, made you afraid of failure. Instead of letting failure define you, let it teach you. As the matter of fact, it is happiness matters most, whatever happens in your life. Do remember no one can ever take away his choice to be happy. Close your eye. Put your hand on your heart. Breathe deeply until you feel your spirit floating up. Love you so much.

Mom

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

From the work I did during the summer vacation, I understand that money was not easy to earn. I felt it a shame to wasting food. For the old generation we advocate saving money. Take my parents for an example, they save every cent they can. When they talk about traveling, they will hesitate and final give up because of money. However, I think reasonable consumption not only including the basic needs, also the amusement. Life is short. We should enjoy every moment and see different people and beautiful sceneries. Most people have the plan to save money, but if they take in a small part, life can be much happy.

【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文. 文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处. 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.

My dream school starts at 8:30a.m and ends at 3：30p. m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore，we have more time with after﹣school activities. For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom. We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I am a little girl, I wanted to be a film star. I thought it would be cool to be in the middle of the stage. I used to thinking if I became a film star, I would make many money and lead a happy and rich life. But I changed my dream. Over the recently months, I have seen many doctors and nurses who tried their best save others despite the danger they face and tiredness. They are real hero in our society. They are the most beautiful people in your heart, who, as a matter of fact, deserves our highest respect. I have been made up my mind to be one of them and to be an useful person.

【推荐3】短文改错

No one lives without a dream． If the path is smooth or tough， we are on the way to achieve it． As a senior 3 student， I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted with an ideal university． In the past three years， I had done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learned from my teachers． Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer in my dream． anxiety and pressure discourage me now and then． However， with the discouragement of my teachers and classmates， I think I will make out it．

I'm sure that there is still a long way to go to achieve my dream． No matter how challenged it is， I will make it come true． as the proverb said． "where there is a will， there is a way．''