增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, I go to a painting exhibition. Upon entering the gallery, I put on the earphones, that could give me information of all the painting. Suddenly, I noticed an elderly woman who didn't know what to use the earphones stood anxiously in the front of a painting. I rushed her without hesitation and helped him put on the earphones. The woman thanked me for my kind. I realized help others could really bring a great moment of happiness. That day I appreciated lots of breathtaking paintings. More important, I learned a valuable lesson from the grateful smile given by the elderly woman.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today, my presentation is about David, a online illustrator (插图画家), and his paintings. David is fond of China’s national treasure, the giant panda. Recently, he has combined the panda image with various internationally famous paintings, caused Internet excitement. He has been planning to do this creative paintings for some time, and is glad what so many people like his paintings, After all, Chinese giant pandas were born to be models and can be easily adapted so many oil paintings. He pays attentions to Chinese traditional paintings, and western masterpieces as well as. He strongly believe that the Chinese panda matches good not only the Chinese style elements but also the world culture.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My aunt is a well-known artist. Her paintings are such lifelike that they always give me much pleasures. My aunt always reminds me of that there is more than one way of interpreting a painting. In my opinion, art is supposed to shared. It is a form of communication. I couldn't agree with her much. When viewers look at a work of art, they were bringing with them all their life experiences as well as previous memories. That one experiences will not be exactly the same as someone else's when face with the same piece. Perhaps that's where its truly beauty lies.
【推荐3】下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Beijing Opera is a tradition opera with a long history, that dates back to over200 years ago. In the 18th century, to celebrate the emperor’s birthday, who had a strongly interest in local operas, four famous troupes(剧团)from Anhui Province come to Beijing to perform for him. After that, a new type came into being gradually, knowing as Beijing Opera.
Beijing Opera features four major role—Sheng, Dan, Jing, Chou. It has been regarded as one of the cultural treasures of China. Beijing Opera is not only popular with china, but also has spread to many the other places. It is playing important role in carry forward Chinese culture.
My friend Tony and I always walks home together after school. Last Monday, however, something happened in our way back.
We are walking that day when we heard the loud cry behind us. Looking around, we were surprising to see a woman lying on the ground. It seemed that she was injured bad. We hurried to her, but a man came over to stop us from helping the woman. Some girls walking by even laughed us. We got very angry with the people who were cold to the women. Then the man asked us to turn around and we saw a man carrying a video camera on her shoulder. They were just making for a film!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
By the time Tom graduated from Yale University, he has undertaken a part-time job for 3 years, from that he accumulated abundant experience. However, he was much cast down by his failure to find a satisfying job. It occur to him that he should apply to the position provide by that large company. A great many applicant participated in the interview. Apparent, the competition was fierce. The advantage was which he had a good command of English. He owed to his first English teacher that he had a good pronunciation. Fortunately, all his efforts were not in the vain and he succeeded in finding his ideal job.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(—),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father is knowledgeable, because he can always give me advices and help me make the best decision. Having graduated college, he landed a job in a company, but soon he felt boring to sit in the office all day long. My grandfather suggested that he thought carefully what he really wanted. Therefore, my father quit to travel across China, hope to find the answer during the trip. When he arrived at a mountainous village, and he was shocked to find there was a urgent need for teachers. How he saw in local children’s eyes—eagerness to acquire knowledge— moved them, so he decided to settle down and teach them. Now, he had students all over the country.