注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Today was my father’s birthday, which was so a big day for me, so I wanted to give her a surprise. My father always gave me that I wanted. I told my mother that I wanted to cook a delicious dinner for my father and she was very happy to teaching me. I listened attentive at first as it was the first time that I cooked. However, under my mother’s help, I cooked with great caution. I felt much confident than before. Two hours later, my efforts were paid off. I felt happy that each of my dishes have a different taste and a unique style.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am an only child in my family. While eating, my parents always leave myself the best dish. But I don’t eat out much because I don’t have some appetite all the time. One day, my friend Alice asked me come to her house for dinner. In her family, a feeling was so pleasant because there had two kids in the family. When they were eating, my friend and her sister fight for the food. They ate a lot and laughed happy. I felt so happy but ate a lot. I got to know that the eating atmospheres could be very important.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从见11处起）不计分。
My father's friend Henry used to be a teacher at a medical school and he was very strict to his students. The students were afraid of him though he was seldom pleased with the answers they gave. Once a student seated before him, and Henry required him to describing a certain illness, his description of which turned out to be OK. Then Henry asked about the cure for the illness, but the student gave the right answer. “How much will you give the patient? ""A full spoor’s!" Suddenly the student realizes that there was anything wrong. He said anxiously,"I've made the mistake：a full spoon is too many, and he can take only five drops." "It's too late；your patient has been died," Henry said coldly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My uncle had been dreaming owning his own restaurant. At 40 year old, he had trouble decide if he should leave his job at a design company and follow his dream, until one day he ran into a young man he'd worked with before. The young man had three children and was finding it difficulty to support the family, because he had been out of the work for several months. My uncle knew how to do to help him. The next morning, he told the manager about his decision to leaving his job. He then gave the manager the name of the young man. Clear, it was the best decision for him because he not only found the courage to follow his dream and also helped the young man. That young father had been working there ever since.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Johnson lived in the woods with his wife and children. He owned a farm, that looked almost abandoned. Luckily, he also had a cow which produced milk every day. He exchanged the milk with other food. The cow was their only means of support. One day, the cow was eating grass while it began to rain heavily. While making efforts to run away, she falls over the hill and died. Then the Johnsons had to make the living without the cow. In order to support his family, Mr. Johnson began to plant vegetable. Since the plants took a while to grow it, he started cutting down trees to sell them. Thought about his children’s clothes, he started growing cotton too. When harvest came, he was already selling vegetables and cotton m the market where people met regular. Now it occurred him that his farm had much potential and that the death of the cow was a bit of luck.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It snowed last night, when was quite rare here in Western Washington State. School canceled for the day and the neighborhood kids were so exciting! A couple of my young neighbors knocked polite on my door and asked if they could all play in their courtyard. I was happy to having them and soon they were making snowmen and having snowball fights. I invite them in to have hot cocoa and homemade cookie. The snow didn't last long — it started raining in this afternoon — so I enjoyed seeing the kids have so much fun while it was here!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One afternoon I was sitting at my favorite table in a restaurant, waited for the food I had ordered. Suddenly I noticed a man sitting at table near the window kept glancing at my direction. Finally he got away and went into the kitchen. When he came out, he paid his bill and left. I called the owner of the restaurant and asked what the man wanted. He told me that the man was a detective. She thought I was the man he was looking for. Because he came into the kitchen to check for it. Since everybody knew me, the staff told him that he had made a mistake. It's really luck I came to a restaurant that I am known.
