增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are interesting in China's "four great new inventions", I'd like to brief introduce one of them to you—high-speed rail. China's high-speed trains ran at a speed of 250—350 km per hour. The country's advanced transportation network has surprised at the world.
Since it takes only a little hours to travel from north China to south China, high-speed rail has given the public a convenient transport alternative. It has also attracted globe attention. As the result, many countries have imported Chinese high-speed rail technology to upgrade them own rail transport systems. I hope that the above informations will be helpful to you. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, I went to Xi’an with two friend. We were excited about a trip. We spent third hours taking the train to Xi’an Railway Station. At first, we were confused about what to get out of the railway station. And then we saw a sign, which led them to take the subway. When we got to the subway station, some advancing ticket machines appeared in front of us, we bought our tickets quickly. When we were on the subway, we never thought it was such fast. It just took us ten minutes to reach to our destination, and we find our hotel soon.
【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Breaking traffic rules and littering are common in these days, caused serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation required everyone's effort. As for me, I'll keep traffic law in mind all the way to school. If I ride the bicycle, I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road when the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I'll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. However, I'll regard that as my duty to help keep our environment clean. Not only I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I'll also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possibly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m 53 years old. I had lived in Liverpool for twenty years and I need to take the No.43 bus from my home to the post office every Wednesday. However, it’s service is not well. The bus only comes every twenty minute. What made me angry was that happened last Wednesday, when it was such a terrible weather! I waited forty-five minutes in the cold and rain, so three empty double-deckers passed me without stopping. As a result, stand by the road, I had to wait another No.43 bus. I waved hardly and patiently to make the driver see me and stop.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mobile payment is serving for people widely in China. The cashless trend had never been more popular. With the widespread use of mobile payment, WeChat and Alipay are two of the most convenient and safe ways to pay. People rarely need to carry a wallet and cash at all. They are used to paying by scan QR codes. When consuming, as result, people will never worry about the consequence which they may get fake notes. Besides, people can often get discounts if we make mobile payments. Mobile payment is winning over plenty of consumer with its convenience. So far mobile payment has great changed people’s life in China.
Believe it and not, 3D-printing has already affected many things in our lives, rightly down to the food we eat. For instance, more than one restaurant in London served 3D-printed hamburgers to customers to date. But perhaps the most significant success which people have achieved is in medicine where human’s body parts are made, including a beating heart. What impressive stuffs! And it is not just humans who benefit from — in Brazil, people have given the new 3D-printed shell to a turtle injured in a forest fire. I’d say it is no doubt that more technological approaches to advance our daily lives are being established.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jim is one of my close friend. Two months before, his mother bought a computer for him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard with the help of the computer. To her surprise, Jim just spent a plenty of time play computer games every day. He was interested them. Now he regrets buying the computer. As the matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computer scientists are now trying to make the computer “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.
