增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On Sunday, Lin Feng, senior high student, was hanging out by the river. Just then a 72-year-old man loses his balance and fell into the water. Many people stood by and recorded that was happening on their phones. None of them were willingly to save the old man. Seeing the old man was in a bad situation, Lin Feng decided to help him with even though he was not good at swimming. The boy jumped into the river and failed to take him to the bank. He held the man up for 15 minute before he became too exhausting. Thankfully, others had joined her by then, and they carried them to safe.
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Mark Twain was once traveling in French. He went on train to Dijon. He was very tired and wanted to sleep. He asked the conductor to call him up when the train came to Dijon. He explained that he was a heavy sleeper. “I may shout loudly when you will try to wake me up, but don’t take any notice of what I say. Just put me of the train.”
Then Mark Twain went to sleep. When he woke up, the train had already arrived to Paris. He thought the conductor had forgotten wake him up at Dijon. He was very angry that he ran up to the conductor and began to shout at him. “I had never been so angry in my life,” he said.
The conductor looked at him and said, “You are not half so angry like the American whom I put off the train at Dijon.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I read a story about a group of explorer who got lost in a desert. The sun was burning hot and everyone quickly ran out water. Later, the group’s leader took out the water bottle and said, “I found a bottle of water in my bag. But until we pass through the desert, anybody is allowed to drink it.” The bottle was passing around the members of the team; it felt heavier. Finally, the explorers made it out of the desert. With tears of joy run down their faces, they had opened the bottle, but out poured sand. Was it a bottle of sand which really saved them in the desert? The answer was no. Their deep faith in the hope of survival, like a seed, had taken root and grown in their hearts. That was how led them out of the terrible situation in the end.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下而写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am totally blind, and therefore specialized training needed to deal with public transportation, street crossings, etc. This morning, I came to the crossing with my trainer. As usual, I ended up standing by the street, at a thorough lost. My trainer told me not to wait too long or you would miss the chance. I begin crossing the street, quickly but cautiously, walking stick in hand, sweep it left to right. I was maybe three quarters to halfway across the street while my walking stick struck a car, which sound was too loud. Then my trainer asked me to go back to her and try again. Because of it took me long to get that right, the lesson was pretty much then. Finally, my trainer allowed me to take her arm and cross the streets.
