增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A couple from Xinjiang did something unusual. They made special trip to Tian’ anmen Square to realize his dream of watching the flag-raising ceremony.
The couple, that live in Tacheng Prefecture of Xinjiang, ride two horses and set off in May. Although they met such many difficulties on the way to Beijing, but the people they met treated them with kindness. On Aug. 1st, they arrived in Beijing and watched the ceremony with their hearts filling with excitement. The wife said this trip broadened her horizon. She told the reporter that she was deeply impressed by our country’s surprised development.
Working hard and assisted by our country, people in Xinjiang feel strong that their future will be much more beautiful.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
George,
It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.After we say goodbye to you,we went to Washington D.C.,where we stayed for three days.My brother was so fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day.However,my father had to return back to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon.It was really a nice experience.If you’d like to make trip to our city some day,I will be better than happy to be your guide.
Yours,
Mike
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was young, I want to be a great hero. But with time goes by, things have changed. Now I’ve decided to become a doctor which can help save people’s lives. This job is helpfully and worth doing. And how to make it come true?
I know it is really big challenge. I will work hard and go all out for it. From now on I will spend on more time learning my lessons, so that I can go to your ideal university. On the same time I am going to read many books on medicines. I believe I will achieve my dream.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I often dream of becoming teacher. I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy for me to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never teach good. What is more, you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Only on this way can you be a good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to make my dream come true .
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号() 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I asked George, a friend of mine was still alive after the earthquake, what had been happened. He said he had just got into bed at half past eleven when he felt the floor shaking over him. The bed started to shake and he saw electric light was moving. I asked him what he did then, and who replied that he got out of bed quick and went to look out of the window. As he looked, he saw the house to the other side of the street begin to shake, either. Then he knew which was happening. He seized her clothes and rushed out into the street.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
Choose a career is a very important stage in people’s life. Almost everything depend on your choice. I’d like to be a interpreter. It’s a very interesting profession where requires advancing knowledge of the foreign language as well as excellent social skills. In my opinion, English and literature is the most important subjects for my future profession, because of my knowledge of English will help me communicate with foreigners fluently and accurately. Literature will not only help me broaden my horizons, but also give me some background knowledges of different cultures. To sum, I’d like to say that the choice of our future career path is extremely important, so we must think twice after making our choice.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I went to work as a volunteer teacher in a small village, that is located in the south of our country. The children there were all from poor families, but they didn’t have nice clothes to wear or food eat. They had to do much housework as our parents had gone to work in cities to make money. They had to take care for their little brothers or sisters. They live a hard life. But they were eager to learn less about the outside world. When asking about their dreams, they gave me the same answer. They said they hoped they could return to their small villages after graduating from college to make their hometown the more beautiful.