增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
Choose a career is a very important stage in people’s life. Almost everything depend on your choice. I’d like to be a interpreter. It’s a very interesting profession where requires advancing knowledge of the foreign language as well as excellent social skills. In my opinion, English and literature is the most important subjects for my future profession, because of my knowledge of English will help me communicate with foreigners fluently and accurately. Literature will not only help me broaden my horizons, but also give me some background knowledges of different cultures. To sum, I’d like to say that the choice of our future career path is extremely important, so we must think twice after making our choice.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In life, we should always care about the people around us, especially those which need help. Helping other not only makes them feel warm but also makes us more responsibly.
Last week I saw an elderly person to fall down on the street, and I quickly run over to help him up. I was busy at that time, and I still decided to help him. The elderly person was very grateful to my help and said he hadn’t met such a kind young man in a long time.
Through this experience, I realize that helping others is a important thing. Each of us should do our part to taking care of the people around us. Only in this way our society become better and more harmonious.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Time is valuable but limit.There’s a famous saying，“Time is money.”，this shows the important of time.When time has gone，it will never return back.It’s a pity when many people make poorly use of time.They spend their precious time oversleeping，drinking and playing.They don’t realize wasting time is equal to waste part of their life.They always regret having made little achievement so far.Therefore，we should form the habit valuing time.Don’t put off that can be done today until tomorrow.Laziness will not only bring us failure，but also lead us on the road of poverty and even death.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Among all the instructive proverb, the one I like best is “Where there is a will, there is a way.”, who tells us that we should stick to our dreams. For me, the saying has specially meaning. When I was in the middle school, I was such poor in my studies that I nearly gave up. Though my headteacher always encouraged me every time I lost my heart. He uses to say, “A little more effort and you will make it.”
Thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid back and finally I became a top student. Nothing is impossible to willing heart. As long as you keep try, you’ll succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Journalism has a good development future. Attracting by it, I’m writing to apply for a position as a journalist. First of all, I’m hard-working but ambitious, which, for sure, can definite help me to do a good job. In addition to, I have accumulated some relevant experience, which can not only broadens my vision but also improve my ability. That I want to stress at last is that I am skilled in photographing. So at your convenient I hope you can take a look at your personal resume. I would appreciate very much if you could take my application into account.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mr. Smith，
I've read your advertisement for the assistant teacher for a children's winter camp. I am quite interesting in this position. Most importantly, I love working with children! As the monitor in your class, in the past two years I proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers. I speak fluent English, what enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effective with students in an English-only environment.
I will soon have a three-week winter vacations, so I have no problem working evenings and weekends. I would be pleased to assist for both the teachers and students in this challenging or rewarding environment.
Looking forward to receive your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
增加：在缺同处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的同用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I had a wonderful summer holiday. Before the holiday, I have spent a lot of effort and time prepare for the College Entrance Examination. However, a good rest needed after the hard study of three years. I did many kinds of relaxed activities, such as going to the park, riding a likes, playing sports, etc. Besides, I took a boat trip along the Three Gorges Dam, that had been dreaming about for in a long time. And I read variety books about college life in our local library to get much knowledge. I also took part in some social activities active and found a part-time job so that I could learn more about society. What meaningful the holiday was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I went to camp with a friend. On the first day, I had a well time with her. We played some game and shared our funny life experience. The second night where my friend talked about her mom, it occurred to me the day was my mother’s birthday. I almost forgot it. I wanted to send her mother the best wishes, but it is about 10 pm, and I thought it was too late. My friend said to me, “Though it is late, but it is necessary of you to give wishes.” So I called my mom and sent her my wishes. She was so happily, and I made a right decide.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents in the housework. Felt quite sorry for that, I began to think about how to do to help. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not to give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and another things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust of all the furnitures. After that, I sweep and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprise to see all the rooms tidily and floors shining. My mother gave me hug. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.
