【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I lost both parents at the age of 18. I would get up early to deliver newspapers to supporting my daily expenses. Then I would rush home to make breakfast, eat quick and then go to school. One morning, the boy named Jimmy came over. He said his parents wanted to talk to me. Jimmy’s mother gave me a delicious breakfast, and Jimmy’s father gave me a new bicycle. I tell him I didn’t have any money, and he said it was a gift. He told me that my newspaper editor was a friend of him and had told him about my parents. I was so much thankful that I didn’t have to walk to work and school anymore! Many years later, I realized that getting that bicycle had changed my life so many ways. And I learned what helping people is a good thing. But that helping people according to their actually needs is the best thing.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father is an engineer work in a big company. He is such busy that he sometimes has to stay up late. Apart from this, he hardly has any times to take exercise. He has been on poor health for some time. My mother and I are worried that he may fall ill if he works too hard. These days I’m thinking why to develop my father’s interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Father’s Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for him. I secret put them on the desk in his study. When my father entered into his study this evening, he looked surprised, but he immediately realized my intention. He promises that he would go jogging every evening.
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【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I was in the shopping center with my neighbor, who was there to collect several item for a friend. One of the friend’s parents were struck by a serious disease. While staying there, I became aware a young mom with her daughter. She was paying the attention to her as they shopped. I stopped her to offer my appreciation to him for the fact which she was so devoted to her little girl. I went on to say that I feel sad to see moms texting or talking on their cell phones and completely ignore their children. I praised her and told the little girl that she had the good mom in the whole world. The mom smiled, obvious feeling happy at my words.

【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As it is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous places of interest in China. Everybody wants to go there, but I am no exception. Then, this summer vacation, the day I have been looking forward to coming at last. I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followed behind. After two hours' bus ride, we arrived at which looked like the large market, where there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. Looking at that, my enthusiasm immediate disappeared. Indeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My twelve birthday was the most unforgettable and special one. On that day, I received a life-changing gift from my grandmother. It was the pair of roller skates. I couldn’t believe my eye when I opened the box. The shoes were so beautiful.

The shoes total changed my life. Because in the past I was scared to talk with others, so I used to have no friends. The moment I learn how to skate, I became confidence and outgoing. I made plenty friends by doing this.

I’m grateful to my grandmother. Now I’m a happy girl and believe in me. I always smile when met new people.

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week, I have an accident in parking lot beside my house. I was just going around the corner when a man crashed into him with his shopping basket. It was impossible to see each other after the accident because the corner was very darkness and the lights didn’t even work. So I fell, got knocked out and was serious hurt. Although the parking lot paid for the accident, but I still want to give some advices to the parking lot. Always get the lights checking at least once a week and make sure the floor is dry all the time, that would help make the parking lot a safer place.