假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was young, I want to be a great hero. But with time goes by, things have changed. Now I’ve decided to become a doctor which can help save people’s lives. This job is helpfully and worth doing. And how to make it come true?
I know it is really big challenge. I will work hard and go all out for it. From now on I will spend on more time learning my lessons, so that I can go to your ideal university. On the same time I am going to read many books on medicines. I believe I will achieve my dream.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
I was very happy to receive your e- mail in that you asked me about my life. As a Senior 3 student, I was now working very hard to preparing for the National College Entrance Examination. In class, I listen to the teachers attentively and take notes careful. Out off class, I take an active part in various sport to keep healthy, which, I believe, is very important for my study.
Both my teachers and parents give me many support. With their help and encouragement, I have been made great progress and been able to build up our confidence. I have decided to attend medical university.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Mary
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, but I could never see anything through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything,” I said. Then he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to men. With my pleasure, I saw something and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted, and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m terrible sorry to have missed the first two lessons this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing.Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shop were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. That’s how I was late for school.
Please don’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I often imagine that my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very difference in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by now. I will have mine own small but happy family, probably with two lovely kid. As for my work, I will work in a beautiful school as English teacher because I loves English very much. I think I will enjoy my work but get along well with my colleagues. In my spare time, I think I will travel to around the world to open my eyes and get relaxing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When someone ask me what my Chinese Dream is, I will tell him “To be a good doctor” with any hesitation (犹豫). The reason why I want to be a doctor is because I want to save as many people’s lives as I can. When I was young, I have a terrible car accident. Thank to the doctors, I survived and recovered. From then on, to be a good doctor has always been a inspiration to myself. I will study hardly to make sure that my dream will be come true in the future. Chinese Dream is made up of every ordinary person’s dream. We should do our best realize our dreams.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every high school student wants to get into famous universities and they spend most of their time review lessons. Nowadays, many graduates find hard to be admitted to famous universities. To be honest, only the small number of students can get so golden chances. Therefore, I have a strong desire to enter into Peking University to study. To make my dream come true, I have to know my advantage and disadvantages. Besides, I must work hard or put all my efforts into study. Most important, I must arrange my time properly. I was approaching my dream university now.