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题型:改错-短文改错 难度:0.65 引用次数:178 题号:15271857
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Perhaps every mother is willing to give her children enough love. A mother’s love inspires her children to overcome difficulties, make progresses and remain healthy. However, too much love can also have a badly effect on children. Out of love, my mother used not to let me to do anything—she actually does all the things around the house. But now she’s starting to ask me to do some housework because she found that it caused me to being lazy and even kept me mastering living skills.

In my opinion, we should do some things by themselves. We should also help our mothers do as many housework as possible. Always fighting hard to become stronger and pay back our mothers love.

【知识点】 家人和亲人

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My dad is the person to which I’m most grateful. Not only does he take good care of me physically, but he also inspires me spiritually.

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