假定你是李华,最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了,现在给外教Melinda写一封邮件请求帮助。邮件内容包含:
1.吵架的原因;
2.吵架后的心情;
3.请求Melinda给出解决办法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Melinda,
The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.
The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt frustrated ever since.
I really don't want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices? Looking forward to you reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Luo Ming had a disappointing look today. When I asked her the reason, she said that the winter vacation was going to be over soon and that she had to go back to school. Luo Ming doesn't do well in her studies but she isn’t interested on studying. I guess that’s how she doesn’t want go back to school. But I look forward to go back to school. I enjoy studying very much. It helps enrich her knowledge. After relaxing for more than twenty day in the cold winter , now I am full of a energy and can’t wait to study in the classroom again. I hope Luo Ming will one day finding the fun of studying,too.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Being a good listener can not only help someone solve much of life’s problems but also improve one’s way of dealing with matters. There was a time when a misunderstanding occurs between my friend and me, and we quarreled terrible at that time. For the sake of our friendship, I took great trouble to make an explanation to her. But as result, the more I explained, the more angrier he seemed. Therefore I was very disappointing. One day, quarrel with him again, I suddenly realized that I should be a listener so that he could tell me how was in his mind. And it
did work! The misunderstanding between us was removed and we became friend again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第 11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I'll meet him at the airport and then we will take Bus No. 8 for my home. You worry about the weather here in your last email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from that in your city. It isn't very cold, but you needn't bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
Looking forward to meet you soon.
Yours,
John
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改:在错的同下划一横线(\),并该词下面写出修改后的词
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Eric,
How are everything going with you? Learning that I want to work in Beijing for a while, now I am writing to give you some information. It’s about an advertisement in that you might be interested. The other day I see an ad in the newspaper, Talent English Training School is looking for the couple of native English with a university degree, education or other related field. A foreign expert certificate is also requiring. I think you are just the kind of person they want. If you are interested, you can dial 7865466 or send them an email. I wish you good lucky!
Yours,
Li Hua
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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