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下面的考生作文中共有10处语言错误,请改正
假定你是李华,最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了,现在给外教Melinda写一封邮件请求帮助。邮件内容包含:
1.吵架的原因;
2.吵架后的心情;
3.请求Melinda给出解决办法。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Melinda,

The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I need your help now.

The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt frustrated ever since.

I really don't want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices? Looking forward to you reply.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

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