增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Four months ago I was walking on the campus while I heard two students saying that Mrs. Wu, our English teacher, would retire next month.
I returned to the classroom and shared the news for my classmates. To express our thanks to Mrs. Wu for her patient teaching, we agreed on a celebration after a heating discussion.
After school we began to make fully preparations. I went to a flower shop, where I bought a bunch of flowers, represents our love and respect for our dear teacher. One of my classmate had some PowerPiont slides made, which included many photos recording the touching moments we spent them together.
When she came into the classroom on Wednesday morning, all of us stood up. I presented the flowers to him. With tears in her eyes, Mrs. Wu was greatly moved by what we do! She said her feelings were beyond words.
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In a different evening of November two years ago, we had a big party to celebrate Thanksgiving Day in the Concert Hall in our school. Present at the party was all the students and teachers, apart from some of the school leaders. Working together on stage, the teachers and students gave a lot of wonderfully American performances. For an example, they cooperated with each other perform witty skits(滑稽短剧)as well as singing and dancing. To our surprises, they also played magic tricks. The performances were very amazing that we all had a good time that evening.
Therefore, happy time really flies. The moment finally comes when the party came to an end. We are looking forward to get together to perform again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Spring Festival, also knowing as the Chinese New Year, is a traditional festival in China. The Spring Festival usually falls in lately January or early February. People celebrate them in different ways.
I always come back to home to celebrate the festival with my family. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all the family members will get together or have a big dinner. Then, while watched the Spring Festival Gala, we will play games and talk about which has happened recently until midnight.
On first day of the New Year, people usually wear new clothes and visit their relatives. They said “Happy New Year!” to each other, which is a good way to express their best wish for the coming year.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Living far from a town encourages me to be more creativity. I got a new idea about gift giving after Christmas! I recycled two glass bottles, cleaned them, but then decorated them with colorful stickers, using my mother's nail polish to paint it. And then, I picked some berries in the bush nearby. The better part I enjoyed was to wander through the grass field, breathe fresh air and to pick branches of sweet wild flowers. Lay out fruits and flowers properly in the bottles, I make special Christmas gifts of my own fashion. One for my teacher(her 38h birthday is today!)and other for a classmate which gifted me with a lovely toy last year.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Yesterday I answered telephone from my teacher in junior middle school, Mr. Li, which full name is Li Ming, a Chinese teacher. I loved her lessons very much. But when I went into school as a child, I don’t like Chinese lessons. After he began to teach me, I changed a lot, but then I respect him very much. Sometime I thought he was my father, and I told him a lot of my personal things, and asked him for some advices.
He never felt tired and helped me to find out the best way to solve (解决) problems that I was looking forward to solve, so I’m always willing to learn many knowledge from him. He is not only my best teacher but also my best friend. I won’t forget him to forever.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
My name is Li Kang. I live in Shijiazhuang, a capital city of Hebei Province. It is my first day at Senior High school and I’m writing it down my thoughts about it.
In my school, the teachers are kindly and friendly and the classroom are amazing. Our English teacher is a very enthusiastic woman call Ms Shen. Her method of teaching is nothing like those of the teachers at my Junior High school. I don’t think I will be bored in his class. She wants to help us improve our spelling and handwriting. We do this a fun way, with spelling games and other activities. I like her attitude very much, and the behaviour of the other students shows that they like her, too.
There is fortynine girls and sixteen boys in our class. And everyone in our class is hardworking. I’m looking forward to do the homework tonight.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ll never forget Italian professor, which ever taught at the University of Pisa. First, I was touching by his devotion to teach. Because his lectures were always clearly made, his students like walking into his classroom. Besides, I admired him because of he would communicate with his students outside the classroom. Drinking coffee in the bar, he could easily make friend with his students. I was also attracted by his intelligence. He said, “No class hour is successful unless all the students in the class but the professor share at least one loud laugh.” Through his sense of humorous, he made learning more enjoyable. If it’s true that life makes a wise man smile and a foolishly man cry, then my friend is truly a wise man.