增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We set off very earlier in the morning. My brother and I sat in the backseat of Dad’s old car. We were excited because of we were going to countryside to pick apples. When we got there, we saw hundreds of trees filling with apples! Some were golden yellow, and some were bright red. We even saw some apples what were very green. I tasted one of the apples. It was such sweet. The sun was rising in the sky and we could feel the fresh airs around us. My brother climbed a tree and started picking apples. I stood on the ground to pick apples from another tree happy. It didn’t take long for ourselves to pick three baskets of apples. Then, we go home to make some apple pies.
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Spring has come with all its beauty! Trees have turned green or flowers can be seeing everywhere. Last Friday, my friends and me went on a spring outing. It was such a great fun! We cycled along the streams and down the paths. It didn't take us long to get the foot of the mountain, when we left our bikes. Then we begin hiking. As we reached the top of the mountain, we were shocking to see many plastic bottle and food bags here and there. All of us started to collect the rubbish and then took it down the mountain. We felt happily to have done our part for the environment.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The time I spend with my friends is wonderful. I frequently went to the park near my home with my male friend John. We often do outdoor sports together, what is not only good for our health and also promotes our friendship. We both enjoy playing basketballs, so we have two basketballs. Beside, John and I also like to play baseball. To my delighted, he has been teaching me how play baseball patiently. She has a good ball but doesn’t have a baseball bat, so I have bought one. When we do sports together, we have much too fun. I hope we can always enjoy the happily time that sports bring us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now I don't watch television at all. But a few years ago I was watched it every night. I was often a little tiring after a day's work and watching TV is the most common everyday activity, that demands very little effort. Unfortunate, some of my family wanted to see one program so others preferred another. I am happy with any program but the others spent a lot time arguing. There was no way of settle the matter except by selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. I am happy for the change because researchers have found what harmful being a couch potato can be, and watching TV was linked to a great risk of heart disease compared with reading.
